All I Feel

by Joli

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Joli2005-11-14 01:24:57
This was something I wrote shortly after I became admin.. I just never thought to post it, because.. it's rather short. It hints at Joli's past and some of her relationships.



I've seen tears in my mother's eyes,
long ago when my daddy died
with drowning dolphins in his eyes
And I wondered why...

Some don’t know me anymore
Eager little girl with too much pride
That’s all I am and nothing more
but all I feel is love inside

I’ve found love in the sea
more then he could ever offer me
as I slowly remember how to breathe
I wonder why...

Some don’t know me anymore
Eager little girl with too much pride
That’s all I am and nothing more
but all I feel is love inside
Acrune2005-11-14 04:14:25
Nice. Now write a poem that shows how you felt after being admin ate your soul. It'd be interesting to show the contrast. happy.gif
Joli2005-11-14 04:18:08
QUOTE(Acrune @ Nov 13 2005, 11:14 PM)
Nice. Now write a poem that shows how you felt after being admin ate your soul. It'd be interesting to show the contrast.  happy.gif
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heh, already working on that. Joli has an identity crisis going on, but she is happy right now. The next one will be very said.. I can already feel it. sleep.gif
Iridiel2005-11-14 16:34:03
It would start as:
I've seen tears in novice eyes
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Joli2005-11-14 21:39:10
QUOTE(Iridiel @ Nov 14 2005, 11:34 AM)
It would start as:
I've seen tears in novice eyes
tongue.gif
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tongue.gif Lame.
Acrune2005-11-14 23:34:06
What about 'I put tears in novice eyes'? happy.gif
Joli2005-11-15 00:53:03
QUOTE(Acrune @ Nov 14 2005, 06:34 PM)
What about 'I put tears in novice eyes'?  happy.gif
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sad.gif I was nice to the novices!

Cept the ones that liked to kill people..