Seeking designers!

by Athana

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Athana2006-03-19 22:10:24
Alright after a lot of putting off I decided I finally want to get Athana a pet and I've chosen on a chimera of the lion/goat/dragon species. If you think you're good at designing and want 20 credits go ahead and PM me. Thanks smile.gif
Daganev2006-03-19 22:24:34
With dark wings that can effortlessly blot out the sun, this roc's wingspan
could easily cover fifteen meters, if not more so. Sharp black talons of
massive proportions, big enough to carry the largest of land creatures, arc
away from the roc's long toes. Its beak is heavyset and long, with a wicked
downward curve at the end for ripping into quarry. The bird of prey's eyes are
reflective and sharp, with one eye being covered by a mask of black feathers as
to appear nonexistent, and a ragged crest of feathers extends from the back of
its head. Predominantly charcoal, the roc's long feathers are mottled over with
light patterns of black and dark blue.
Ziz Renanim, the black roc is a humble-looking creature.
He weighs about 700 pounds.
He is mountable as a legendary steed.
He is loyal to Spirit Warden Daganev, Warrior of Nature.
Ziz Renanim, the black roc is holding:
Nothing.

Thats my pet... Do I qualify as a good designer?
Hazar2006-03-19 23:19:25
Is it okay if I have a dracnari head instead of a dragon head?
Athana2006-03-20 01:22:28
Wow, I've already gotten many really nice descriptions. I know some people are still working on them so I'll wait a little before choosing the final one and I'll be throwing some credits to those who put effort into writing something.

Something to note: I forgot to mention this but the creature needs to be able to fly so some dragon wings would be dandy. Thanks again, everyone!
Athana2006-03-25 04:16:31
Thank you to Jasper and Dvyrus...he's perfect!

Name: Chrylen

Short: Chrylen, the majestic chimera

Long: Exhaling dark plumes of smoke with each breath, Chrylen, a three-headed chimera crouches here in a state of majestic repose.

Extended: Poised with ferocity, this bestial chimera carries with it a lethal feeling of predatory instinct. Its body is in the shapely form of a lion with a flexible muscle structure. Instead of fur, the body is covered in rippling midnight blue scales that are edged with fine tinges of black. Exceedingly large, leathery wings protrude from the back of this chimera, strong enough to stay aloft for long periods at a time. A slender tail extends from its backside which whips about aggressively, adorned by a single sharp spike. The front-legs of a lion raise this creature confidently above the ground, with its clawed paws capable of shredding its victim to pieces, while its hind-legs are like that of a goat – capped with sharp hooves. The most startling feature of this unseemly hybrid is its massive multi-skulled head, composed of a goat, a lion, and a fear-inspiring dragon.

Entry: Bellowing loudly, Chrylen, the majestic chimera bounds in from the $DIR.

Exit: With an impressive flap of his wings, Chrylen, the majestic chimera launches himself off his haunches as he vaults to the $DIR.

Death: No longer able to inspire awe, the motionless body of Chrylen lies dead.
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Reactions:

Enter Ixion:
To everyone else: Chrylen utters a low growl as he inches towards Ixion, nipping at his leg playfully.

To Ixion: Upon seeing your arrival, Chrylen utters a low growl and inches towards you, nipping at your leg playfully.
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Enter enemy:
To everyone else: Baying in rage at $who's arrival, Chrylen narrows his eyes into thin slits as he rears up from his restful state into a more bellicose posture.

To enemy: Baying in rage at your arrival, Chrylen narrows his eyes into thin slits as he rears up from his restful state into a more bellicose posture.
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Random (just goes off randomly):
With a dramatic yawn, Chrylen stands from his restful state and stretches lazily, walking a half-circle into a more comfortable position before flopping back to the ground.
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Upon hearing Athana’s name:
(if Athana isn't there)
Upon hearing his mistress's name, Chrylen perks his ears back and looks towards $who hopefully.
Upon hearing his mistress's name, Chrylen perks his ears back and looks towards you hopefully.
(if Athana is there)
Upon hearing her name, Chrylen sidles closer to Athana, growling protectively.
(to Athana)
Upon hearing your name, Chrylen sidles closer to you, growling protectively.
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Given any item:
Chrylen's heads snap at each other in anger over who (item) belongs to, tearing it to shreds in the ensuring battle over possession.
Unknown2006-04-01 19:10:37
Heh, the last message is cute!

Can't wait to see your pet the game.