I havent got the time to color it and its been sitting at my office computer for 2 months now so I thought I'll just post it here so I can get some constructive comments while its still not finished.

Shes pointing her cudgel, getting ready for a cudgel blast heading straight to the viewer's pov. Thats me cheering at the back

Ooooooo! I like it! If you don't submit that to artisianals, I'll be disappointed.

I've already said something like this to you before about the picture.. but..
Yay Gelo! Gelo! *prance*
But I still feel uncomfortable about that outfit..

I was wondering what you thought about that.

And I can't see you being angry like that easily either.

Awww cute little Yini *pet*

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39780083/

Because Corinthian said he doesnt like my style.

Ooo, I like them both. Very well done!

First one's better. 2nd one is a waaay worse outfit

perhaps I should just change it to the usual flowing robes then.

That second one shows a side of innocent little Yini I've never seen before...

I like the first one better, but I also like the artist's comment for the second one

Shiroiiiiii!!!

Im gonna chenge her outfit...

I still don't like your style, sorry

Its ok
I just tried a different style. First time I tried inking my work.
I never really inked anything till now.