Thrasymachus2006-09-11 04:13:03
The Light in all its glory is something that must be revered.
Why you ask, should I revere the Bloundering Light?
Its love of life.
Its warm embrace.
Its age old glory.
The way it sheds its tears in remembrance of the way things used to be.
The Taint in all its glory is something that should be revered.
Why you ask, should I revere the Sickining Taint?
Its the incredible engine of change.
Its mind is open in ways we won't discover.
Its power comes from that which was here before here could be imagine.
The way it has no tears to shed.
The Pure Nature in all its glory is something that is revered.
Why you ask should I revere the Conceited Nature?
Its what we are all from.
Its beauty.
Its what we will all return to.
The way it sheds its tears at every life cut short.
The Wyrd in all its glory is something that should be revered.
Why you ask should I revere the Twisted Wyrd
Its been touched directly by power that are beyond all comprehension.
Its unique beauty that may lie in its despair.
Its dark embrace of its forest.
The way its tears flow down its cheeks in defense of itself.
The Light is something that must be feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the All Loving Light?
Its swift action to do destroy that which is not it.
Its belief that it is the final word on good and bad.
Its forgets its own dark past.
The way all the tears it has shed has been for itself.
The Taint is something that should be feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the Changing Taint?
Its belief that all things should be changed for its betterment.
Its way of opening a mortal's mind to madness.
Its power is twisted and dark.
The way that it cannot shed a single tear.
The Pure Nature is something that is feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the Proud Nature?
Its disdain for all things that is not it.
Its brutal nature.
Its waits for our deaths as much as it anticipates our creation.
The Wyrd is something that should be feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the Crying Wyrd?
Its been touched by true darkness and changed by unlimited blindness.
Its way of passing on its agony to all that it touches.
Its darkened its forest in ways that were never intended.
The Battle of Tears cannot be won.
The Battle of Tears exists so we can all cry.
The Battle of Tears exists becouse we should all cry.
Why you ask, should I revere the Bloundering Light?
Its love of life.
Its warm embrace.
Its age old glory.
The way it sheds its tears in remembrance of the way things used to be.
The Taint in all its glory is something that should be revered.
Why you ask, should I revere the Sickining Taint?
Its the incredible engine of change.
Its mind is open in ways we won't discover.
Its power comes from that which was here before here could be imagine.
The way it has no tears to shed.
The Pure Nature in all its glory is something that is revered.
Why you ask should I revere the Conceited Nature?
Its what we are all from.
Its beauty.
Its what we will all return to.
The way it sheds its tears at every life cut short.
The Wyrd in all its glory is something that should be revered.
Why you ask should I revere the Twisted Wyrd
Its been touched directly by power that are beyond all comprehension.
Its unique beauty that may lie in its despair.
Its dark embrace of its forest.
The way its tears flow down its cheeks in defense of itself.
The Light is something that must be feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the All Loving Light?
Its swift action to do destroy that which is not it.
Its belief that it is the final word on good and bad.
Its forgets its own dark past.
The way all the tears it has shed has been for itself.
The Taint is something that should be feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the Changing Taint?
Its belief that all things should be changed for its betterment.
Its way of opening a mortal's mind to madness.
Its power is twisted and dark.
The way that it cannot shed a single tear.
The Pure Nature is something that is feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the Proud Nature?
Its disdain for all things that is not it.
Its brutal nature.
Its waits for our deaths as much as it anticipates our creation.
The Wyrd is something that should be feared.
Why you ask, should I fear the Crying Wyrd?
Its been touched by true darkness and changed by unlimited blindness.
Its way of passing on its agony to all that it touches.
Its darkened its forest in ways that were never intended.
The Battle of Tears cannot be won.
The Battle of Tears exists so we can all cry.
The Battle of Tears exists becouse we should all cry.
Xenthos2006-09-12 04:38:40
I'd suggest some spell-checking (for example, the last line, though others need further review), as well as remembering that "it is" is "it's", while "its" as a possessive remains the same.
Everiine2006-09-12 04:41:12
But wow... the sheer contrast of imagery, the way it's all ironically set up... that's awesome.