I'm trying to decide what to use as my custom shout and zap.

10cr for each if I use yours.

'nuff said.

shaking your mind causing slight pain to ring from your ears as Ixion shouts "im a little tea cup"
A booming call sounds from somewhere in the distance as a massive blaze of (thunder/what ever you want) slams down from the sky.

Thunder doesn't blaze, so it'd have to be something else.

meh i think its lightning that blazes isnt it?

Not to nitpick too much, but that was pretty poor. I appreciate the attempt though.

-shrug- one more step towards posting godhood.

These are prolly pretty poor too, but what the heck:

Shout message:
The very air seems to tremble as the awful voice of (Ixion!) rends the aether with the words, "Kittens are cute!"

Zap seen by zapee:
A moment of unnatural silence is your only warning before holy fire decends from above in the form of black lightning which strikes you squarely in the chest, exploding your heart and crisping your flesh as you die horribly.

Zap seen by others:
The firmament is peirced by a bolt of black lightning which archs toward the earth, followed by a pitiful scream.


It is a lightning kind of zap you're talking about, right?

Keep em coming, and Hazar the ones you PM'd me were pretty nice....

A deep, booming voice, that quakes the very essence of your soul cries "blah"
A voice throbbing with dark, enigmatic power booms "blah"
A dark voice, cutting through all obstacles booms "blah"
A tyrannical voice, fraying the edges of your very sanity bellows "blah"
Ixion, his voice bringing your darkest memories to your mind shouts "blah"

ok, and zaps

You feel your body contort as a razor thin jolt of electric power streams into your body from the havens, setting every nerve alive with indescribable pain.
An enormous shaft of electric blue light slams into your body, a veritable torrent of electric energy scouring through your body.
You feel every hair on your body rise as a great ball of energy, crackling with jolts of electricity descends upon you, wracking your body with pain.
Your body is thrown, spasming to the ground as bright jolts of electric power explode up from the ground below you. (who says zaps have to be from above?)

Screams of utter torment accompany the steady rumbling of the earth as Ixion's voice resounds across the land saying, "Lulz.".

1st: A cacophony of tortuous screams becomes deafening as a blaze of crimson lightning engulfs your being, nearly shattering your mind and bringing you to your knees in agony.

3rd (Room): A whirlwind of tortuous screams echoes throughout the room as a bolt of crimson lightning engulfs Nejii as he collapses to his knees, whimpering in agony.

3rd (World): The screams of torture and hatred echo throughout the land as a crimson bolt flashes across the firmament.


Mind: Not sure exactly what is needed for custom zaps, but I think that's all..oh, and you didn't specify anything to work with it, so I based it off of the whole "Queen's Own Torturer" thing. :/

Edit: Easily fixed to incorporate the electrical nature.

What are they?

I believe they have to be electrical in nature

^Fixed my post.

I will do more!!

A great mass of red energy, crackling with blue streaks of electricity, comes from the hevens, shaping itself into a yawning maw, which closes upon you, tearing ferociously into your body
A thousand tiny bolts of red electrical energy stream into you, driving their painful tendrils into every part of your body, causing pain beyond madness to rack your form

a small cloud appears over head, as you notice millions of tiny insects moving against your body ripping into your flesh before trailing off back into the swarm of flies.

Needs electricity! I don't act know-it-ally for an ego boost you know
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Well, ok, I do, but the point still stands

ok change flies to electricly charged mosquitos?

Perfect!
and have them explode!

Electrically charged mosquitos..? Don't they tend to go "zap" when they visit the bug zapper, not when they fly back out to bite you? Hm.