I'm looking for someone to proofread my background, preferably someone with knowledge of the Serenwilde (Anokhi is a Moondancer). I don't want to post it here because I don't want every Tom, Dick and Harry nitpicking it. It's mostly been edited for grammar and spelling, so I'm just looking for someone to proofread it to make sure it fits with Serenwilde's current history (it's nothing outrageous, don't worry) and that it's not terribly clichéd or just plain dumb. So if you're willing to give me a hand, post here and I'll pm it to you.

Thanks in advance!

I can help with that, I guess. I only couldn't earlier because of massive event spam.