There were alot of people that helped me in designing my current artifacted staff and well... I moved.. changed guilds. Didn't even get 3 weeks out of it buuuut I gotta recustomize since I moved and it's truly annoying I'm too vain not to waste 50 creds on this again

the Staff of Brilliance

A brilliant staff made of gold lays here.

Slender but sturdy, this polished staff, forged of an alloy of gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and strength with a brilliant yellow lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped shield marked with a sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved behind the shield for ease of use. On the rear of the shield is the image of two stags bounding over a serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a solid tapered stake designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.


Now, I'm not looking to change too much but at least enough to reflect where I am. At first the ouroboros was hidden slightly within the description, now I'm looking to make it more bold and on the front of the shield.
I'm not willing to shy too far away from the Hajamin/Morgfyre theme but I need it also to look more Magi then well...weapon.

So calling for desc helpers out there since everyone knows how horrible I am at this stuff.

Staff of Pestilence?

There could be a Onyx Ouroboros on the top of a twisted petrified wood staff, in the middle of the ouroboros is a jagged tainted rock that oozes and such. Nasty AND cool.

I like the description ideas but I'm not willing to shy too far on the title. I liked the title because it was suppose to be a forgery of the Lance of Brilliance. I want to keep the staff gold and would love to keep the name. Because Munsia's character really isn't of the tainted mind and worships Hajamin within Morgfyre. (Only reason she follows Morgfyre at all really)

A geomancer who doesn't follow the Taint? *eye*

Staff of Tainted Brilliance? Keep the same description but add in some rough marks, where some of the gold has been scratched off so on and so fourth? I dunno if that fits what you described, just what popped into my head

Almost everyone knows Munsia is a Rebel. She doesn't believe that Light or Taint is really over anything cause she really doesn't give a crap. (Nor do I ooc either..I'm anti government). I can conform without conforming . We call it a front

Edit: That's why I'm waiting for Ackleberry. Whether it will get smooshed into the ground or not is not really my problem. I can wait as long as it takes.....<3 Druid

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, forged of an alloy of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and strength with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped shield marked with a setting sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved behind the shield for ease of use. On the rear of the shield is the image of two undead stags bounding over a serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a solid tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.

The transition is great. But it needs to look more magi. After I had it customized I realized that it looks like a warrior weapon more then anything

Edit: Also I'm looking to remove the ouroboros from the back of the shield and put it on the front. Along with the stags

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, created of an melding of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and aura with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped crest marked with a setting sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved behind the crest for ease of use. On the front of the crest is the image of two undead stags bounding over a serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a twisted tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.

read edit (Sorry Dag)

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, created of an melding of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and aura with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped crest marked with a setting sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved along the center of the staff for ease of use. On the front of the crest is the image of two undead stags bounding over an ouroboros serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a twisted tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.

does 'an' really fit there in the first line?

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, created of a melding of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and aura with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped crest marked with a setting sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved along the center of the staff for ease of use. On the front of the crest is the image of two undead stags bounding over an ouroboros serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a twisted tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.

Perfect! Now lets add an orb....

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, created of a melding of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and aura with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped crest marked with a setting sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved along the center of the staff for ease of use. On the front of the crest is the image of two undead stags bounding over an ouroboros serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a twisted tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground. + AN ORB

That's harsh

I'm like one of those elfen mages who can't actually create anything new, but just change or copy the things that allready exist

add an orby sentence, to it, and I'll see if I can "improve" it.

Volunteers?

I had like 8 people help me with the original I really suck at it

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, created of a melding of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and aura with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped orb rests within the grasp of golden tendrils, beneath which lays a crest marked with a setting sun arching away from top and rejoining flawlessly with the border. Five small grooves have been carved along the center of the staff for ease of use. On the front of the crest is the image of two undead stags bounding over an ouroboros serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly. The base of the staff ends in a twisted tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.

I am much too nice of a person.

Slender and twisted, this polished staff, created of a melding of Angkrag gold and steel to combine both an impressive durability and aura with a brilliant sickening yellow-green lustre, extends to a lengthy five feet. A teardrop-shaped crest marked with a setting sun arches away from top, rejoining flawlessly to the centre of the staff. Five small grooves have been carved along the center of the staff for ease of use. On the front of the crest is the image of two undead stags bounding over an ouroboros serpent come full circle with tail grasped firmly; nestled within its sinuous coils, a perfectly spherical orb pulses rhythmically with a dull crimson light. The base of the staff ends in a twisted tapered spike designed to anchor it firmly into the ground.


..I'm having a hard time picturing this. >_<