Unknown2010-09-08 19:18:59
FACT: The players of Lusternia want more beasts.
FACT: The administrators do not have time to devote to the time-consuming process of writing new beasts.
FACT: I want dashros to be converted to beasts.
FACT: I'm among the crappier creative writers.
So, I took the description of desert dashros and began to work. Since I am not the best at this writing business, any help any one with time/willingness could give would be of great appreciation. All I need are more adjectives for options and a better long description (if you believe yourself up to the task). Hopefully, if successful to any degree, we will be able to convert more of our beloved old mounts into beasts. Because we can do anything if we try, with the other forum goers by our side.
Finally, what I started with:
FACT: The administrators do not have time to devote to the time-consuming process of writing new beasts.
FACT: I want dashros to be converted to beasts.
FACT: I'm among the crappier creative writers.
So, I took the description of desert dashros and began to work. Since I am not the best at this writing business, any help any one with time/willingness could give would be of great appreciation. All I need are more adjectives for options and a better long description (if you believe yourself up to the task). Hopefully, if successful to any degree, we will be able to convert more of our beloved old mounts into beasts. Because we can do anything if we try, with the other forum goers by our side.
Finally, what I started with:
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Its (SD 1) tail swinging lazily, a (SD 2) dashro's (SD 3) tongue flicks in and out of its (SD 4) mouth.
SD 1:
ridged
leathery
lithe
hefty
thick
SD 2:
dull gray
gleaming black
dull black
scaly black
sandy brown
bleached brown
burnished gold
stocky
muscular
sun-bleached
scaly
SD 3:
forked
slimy
lively
SD 4:
massive
fanged
dank
formidable
This enormous four legged lizard has (LD 1) skin covered in ridges and bumps, with a (LD 2) tail stretching out from its rear. Its head is long and pointy, and a pair of (LD 3) eyes are set into its small birdlike cranium. Perhaps a cousin to rockeaters, the dashro survives by scooping sand into its (LD 4) maw and sifting out anything edible. A fan of flexible (LD 1) skin hangs around its neck to shield its head from the burning sun.
SD 1:
ridged
leathery
lithe
hefty
thick
SD 2:
dull gray
gleaming black
dull black
scaly black
sandy brown
bleached brown
burnished gold
stocky
muscular
sun-bleached
scaly
SD 3:
forked
slimy
lively
SD 4:
massive
fanged
dank
formidable
This enormous four legged lizard has (LD 1) skin covered in ridges and bumps, with a (LD 2) tail stretching out from its rear. Its head is long and pointy, and a pair of (LD 3) eyes are set into its small birdlike cranium. Perhaps a cousin to rockeaters, the dashro survives by scooping sand into its (LD 4) maw and sifting out anything edible. A fan of flexible (LD 1) skin hangs around its neck to shield its head from the burning sun.
Seraku2010-10-26 01:41:45
Sandojins too. Man that'd be sweet.
