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Unknown2009-10-19 06:54:45
sad.gif I want them to come out for this month.
Aerotan2009-10-19 06:59:08
Ack, gave me a heart attack thinking they'd come out in the minute and a half since I'd hit RN
Lendren2009-10-20 01:35:33
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ANNOUNCE NEWS #1414
Date: 10/20/2009 at 1:24
From: Estarra, the Eternal
To  : Everyone
Subj: September Vesteran Honouors

                      ==( Bardic Winner )==
                             Romero

                    ==( Bardic Runners-up )==
                Lendren, Lyla, Nariah, and Pruxi

                      ==( Bardic Merit )==
             Rylen, Larksyne, Kiradawea, and Aerotan

                    ==( Artisanal Winner )==
                              Ried

                  ==( Artisanal Runners-up )==
              Tervic, Eula, Kharaen, and Golgothura

                     ==( Artisanal Merit )==
            Azula, Haliyzin, Jozen, Jazella, and Gero

Just a reminder that if you submit entries in both Bardic and Artisanal,
you will only be eligible to win one prize (i.e., whichever one placed
higher, if both placed).
Aerotan2009-10-20 01:53:15
Congratulations to those who won. And Lendren, I do believe you must rn at least twice as frequently as I.

EDIT: It likely helps to be logged into the character recieving the award, though.
Unknown2009-10-20 02:53:21
Weeee! clap_1.gif congratulations to everybody!
Lendren2009-10-20 12:49:53
QUOTE (Aerotan @ Oct 19 2009, 09:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Congratulations to those who won. And Lendren, I do believe you must rn at least twice as frequently as I.

EDIT: It likely helps to be logged into the character recieving the award, though.

Yeah, I happened to have logged in minutes before it posted so I got the "you have received a Facebook blessing!" message and I knew I wasn't adopting anyone, so I thought, hmmm... oh, bardics. Bang.

Usually when I write something and then look at it much later I like it less than I did when I was first writing it (the flaws jump out at me more when I see it from a distance), but this particular piece, I like more (the layers of meanings seem richer now than when I was writing it).
Kiradawea2009-10-20 13:18:09
Only Merit? But... but... this was perhaps the best chapter I've ever written. sad.gif
Unknown2009-10-20 14:48:33
I likewise find it very difficult to understand why Haliyzin's wonderfully well done and detailed artwork got only a merit, and some random drawing of a chick with wings and a weird nose was the winner.
Unknown2009-10-20 15:18:05
QUOTE (Vibeke @ Oct 20 2009, 10:48 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I likewise find it very difficult to understand why Haliyzin's wonderfully well done and detailed artwork got only a merit, and some random drawing of a chick with wings and a weird nose was the winner.

I don't quite understand it either, as I believe Haliyzin is a much better artist than I am and have been learning from her work. I actually often question why my artwork wins, but since I don't know who to ask, I can't learn what they like about it.

Either way, people seem to like my work, including the person who commissioned me to draw her character. If you have a problem with it, I invite you to explain to me what you don't like, so I can take your critique into consideration and better myself.
Unknown2009-10-20 21:19:48
QUOTE (Ried @ Oct 20 2009, 11:18 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't quite understand it either, as I believe Haliyzin is a much better artist than I am and have been learning from her work. I actually often question why my artwork wins, but since I don't know who to ask, I can't learn what they like about it.

Either way, people seem to like my work, including the person who commissioned me to draw her character. If you have a problem with it, I invite you to explain to me what you don't like, so I can take your critique into consideration and better myself.


It looks nice, but it's too cartoony colour-wise, and the nose looks extremely weird. It's not bad, it's just that it could use better coloring/shading, as well as the aforementioned nose.

Seriously, some of the work you do is really great and you deserve the winning spot on quite a few occasions (I personally loved the "Lessons" one) but I just didn't understand it here.
Unknown2009-10-20 21:34:40
QUOTE (Vibeke @ Oct 20 2009, 05:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It looks nice, but it's too cartoony, and the nose looks extremely weird. It's not bad, it's just that it could use better coloring/shading, as well as the aforementioned nose.

Seriously, some of the work you do is really great and you deserve the winning spot on quite a few occasions (I personally loved the "Lessons" one) but I just didn't understand it here.

Thank you for the input! I know the nose is a bit off, since I'm having trouble settling on a nose style. As for the cartoony style, I am generally not a realism painter. I'm trying to move towards a more realisitc style though, hence the background.
Unknown2009-10-20 21:41:17
I'd just like it noted that the one with Synl was considered the best one.

Just saying.

Partially to rub it in Rancoura's face.

Rub it hard.
Unknown2009-10-20 21:42:13
QUOTE (Ried @ Oct 20 2009, 05:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thank you for the input! I know the nose is a bit off, since I'm having trouble settling on a nose style. As for the cartoony style, I am generally not a realism painter. I'm trying to move towards a more realisitc style though, hence the background.


Serious portraits look better when they are not in bright and vibrant cartoony colours, but that's just my opinion.

If you ever want to try something more surreal/abstract, here's a description of Vibeke for inspiration, who looks very weird, but not to the point of being silly, and actually has valid roleplay reasons for looking like a freak other than "lyk omg i want 2 be uneeq".

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She is a ferocious undead loboshigaru and is gruesomely twisted by the power of the Taint. Perhaps once hyena-like in appearance, she stands six feet tall even as she is hunched over. Covering her gaunt form is oily, dirty and matted fur, light brown fading to chocolate at her muzzle, the same colour covering her back in a series of spots. Her arms and her long, thick tail are bulky and covered in dark green scales rather than fur, and move with jerking, unnatural movements. Her hands are tipped in wicked black talons that constantly pierce her own palm, leaving it a scarred mess. Stringy and matted hair falls around to her neckline, shielding one of her eyes from view. Her one visible eye, almost always pried wide open, is bloodshot yellow with a glowing red iris that smoulders with hatred, and the constant snarl on her muzzle reveals razor-sharp teeth like the blades of a saw. Her breathing is laboured, snorts escaping her nose with each exhale. A single scar slashes the left side of her muzzle open, the exposed flesh coloured teal. She is wearing barbed robes of gold-etched chitin, a brace of darts, a crimson silk rope belt hung with golden bells, a pocketbelt, a blackened steel jakari frogge, a multicoloured mosaic collar, a necklace of jewelled raindrops, a garnet cuff bracelet of the Destroyer, an ashen cuff bracelet of Deception, a braided ring of bloodstone and emerald, a thin opal band, an etched turquoise ring, an etched coral ring, a thin amethyst band, a thin ruby band, a braided ring of opal and moonstone, an etched beryl ring, a thin emerald band, and an etched opal ring.
Rancoura2009-10-20 21:48:49
QUOTE (Salvation @ Oct 20 2009, 05:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'd just like it noted that the one with Synl was considered the best one.

Just saying.

Partially to rub it in Rancoura's face.

Rub it hard.


...
You know that I hate you, Synnel.
Unknown2009-10-20 21:50:54
Next time!

Looking at all the previous winners, I think I lost out on the "distinctly lusternian" part, since most of the higher-ranked ones and winners seem to be pictures of NPCs and gods, or contain divine symbols, etc, rather than juuuust player pics. This is just speculation, though. blink.gif My Glomdoring looked rather generic.

edit: i hit the button by mistake

So I'm trying to make the next one more Lusternian, with a couple players and an NPC in a very Lusternian location. Except, Meleris looks like a mudkip when I draw him.
Unknown2009-10-20 22:04:27
QUOTE (Red Mongoose @ Oct 20 2009, 05:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Next time!

Looking at all the previous winners, I think I lost out on the "distinctly lusternian" part, since most of the higher-ranked ones and winners seem to be pictures of NPCs and gods, or contain divine symbols, etc, rather than juuuust player pics. This is just speculation, though. blink.gif My Glomdoring looked rather generic.

edit: i hit the button by mistake

So I'm trying to make the next one more Lusternian, with a couple players and an NPC in a very Lusternian location. Except, Meleris looks like a mudkip when I draw him.

This was my mistake too, when I first submitted to artisanals! So since them, though I usually draw other players' characters, I try and incorporate something distinctly Lusternia. Skills are my current inspiration.
Unknown2009-10-20 22:47:08
Lendren2009-10-21 01:48:33
Us bardic-writers are always envious of how many more people look at artisanals than read bardics, so take some comfort in being on the winning side of that at least!
Unknown2009-10-21 03:06:54
QUOTE (Lendren @ Oct 20 2009, 09:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Us bardic-writers are always envious of how many more people look at artisanals than read bardics, so take some comfort in being on the winning side of that at least!


I would really prefer to be an artist rather than a writer. Sure, you can do a lot of things with words, but people will perceive things differently than you. I naturally want everyone to see things the way I see it, thus, I prefer artistry (which has a defined visual picture) over bardics (which leave more to the imagination).

Which is weird, considering I like MUDs more than graphical MMOs.
Unknown2009-10-21 03:13:03
QUOTE (Lendren @ Oct 20 2009, 08:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Us bardic-writers are always envious of how many more people look at artisanals than read bardics, so take some comfort in being on the winning side of that at least!


lol I always feel bad when I hear that bardics/artisanals are announced since I always go straight for the art and I rarely ever read bardics despite having won a bardic myself. :\\