Ixion2005-10-22 17:08:40
I extend this offer to anyone.
I need messages for my Amulet of Ressurection when it is used.
I need one in the first person, one in the third person, and one that the target sees when brought back to life.
Paying credits for the best messages (the ones I end up using).
Happy writing!
I need messages for my Amulet of Ressurection when it is used.
I need one in the first person, one in the third person, and one that the target sees when brought back to life.
Paying credits for the best messages (the ones I end up using).
Happy writing!
Ialie2005-10-22 17:58:59
You clasp your hand tightly around you amulet, suddenly your eyes glaze over and you begin mouthing strange words, speaking whispered sounds of the dead willing $name's soul to be reformed. $name's ghostly forms shimmers hesitantly before responding to your call. Drawn to you like a mouth to the flame, the soul of $name floats down towards the earth, kneeling and trembling before you as ethereal substance becomes flesh and they are reborn.
A slight tingle is felt at the back of your neck as Ixion clasps his hand around his amulet and speaks in harsh dark whispers. Calling the soul of $name back into existence. $name's ghostly form shimmers hesitantly before responding to Ixion's call. Almost as if drawn to him the soul floats down to the earth, kneeling and trembling before Ixion as $name's ethereal substance becomes flesh and they are reborn
Almost as in slow motion, you see Ixion clasp his hand tightly around the amulet. His eyes glaze over but he appears to look directly at you. "Not... Yet..." he whispers. You find drawn to Ixion and you kneel before him, trembling as your ethereal substance becomes flesh and you are reborn.
A slight tingle is felt at the back of your neck as Ixion clasps his hand around his amulet and speaks in harsh dark whispers. Calling the soul of $name back into existence. $name's ghostly form shimmers hesitantly before responding to Ixion's call. Almost as if drawn to him the soul floats down to the earth, kneeling and trembling before Ixion as $name's ethereal substance becomes flesh and they are reborn
Almost as in slow motion, you see Ixion clasp his hand tightly around the amulet. His eyes glaze over but he appears to look directly at you. "Not... Yet..." he whispers. You find drawn to Ixion and you kneel before him, trembling as your ethereal substance becomes flesh and you are reborn.
Ialie2005-10-22 18:03:49
Or how about
You died, sucks to be you. Oh wait Ixion's here. *poof* you are brought back to life.
Hahah $name died. What a freaking loser. Oh wait Ixion is here. *poof* $name has been brought back to life.
Man I rock!! This person died and I can totally play Jesus and bring them back to life with my trusty amulet. "Be healed" my child you say doing your way to cool Jesus pose. YOu add in some break dancing for extra effect and *poof* $name comes back to life.
You died, sucks to be you. Oh wait Ixion's here. *poof* you are brought back to life.
Hahah $name died. What a freaking loser. Oh wait Ixion is here. *poof* $name has been brought back to life.
Man I rock!! This person died and I can totally play Jesus and bring them back to life with my trusty amulet. "Be healed" my child you say doing your way to cool Jesus pose. YOu add in some break dancing for extra effect and *poof* $name comes back to life.
Soll2005-10-22 18:08:06
Nymerya2005-10-22 18:49:50
Frowning in concentration, Ixion lifts a hand and grips his amulet so tightly it breaks the skin. A rivulet of bright red blood slicks the previously bright surface of the amulet, and a howling wind detatches itself from Ixion's form, pushing past you.
A pain grows behind your eyes as you focus on $n. Gripping your amulet tightly, the ended pierce your skin, bloodflowing to cover the surface of the amulet. A jolt runs the length of your arm, and a wind ripples around you before howling away from you.
A howling pierces through your fogged mind, and a sharp jolt slams you back into your body, flesh crawling. You deel the presence of $n next to you, before it slowly fades.
A pain grows behind your eyes as you focus on $n. Gripping your amulet tightly, the ended pierce your skin, bloodflowing to cover the surface of the amulet. A jolt runs the length of your arm, and a wind ripples around you before howling away from you.
A howling pierces through your fogged mind, and a sharp jolt slams you back into your body, flesh crawling. You deel the presence of $n next to you, before it slowly fades.
Ixion2005-10-22 21:05:58
As a note, I hate the word ethereal. Anything remotely leafy is being rejected.
Vix2005-10-22 21:20:21
Heh, ethereal does not necessarily relate to the plane. It has to do with being insubstantial and etheric.
Munsia2005-10-22 22:15:47
QUOTE(Ixion @ Oct 22 2005, 05:05 PM)
As a note, I hate the word ethereal. Anything remotely leafy is being rejected.
210482
Nothing wrong with the word ethereal. you hunt on it everyday
Richter2005-10-22 22:19:44
Yeah, ethereal doesn't mean leafy.
And I had this kickass one, where you raised it above your hand, slammed it into them, their eyes opened wide in silent shock, and then these spears of light started plunging into the person, surrounding them, and lifting them upright, alive.
But then firefox crashed, and I lost it.
And I had this kickass one, where you raised it above your hand, slammed it into them, their eyes opened wide in silent shock, and then these spears of light started plunging into the person, surrounding them, and lifting them upright, alive.
But then firefox crashed, and I lost it.
Unknown2005-10-22 22:33:10
I agree with Ixion, the word "ethereal" is played out in fantasy settings.
Munsia2005-10-22 22:34:29
QUOTE(Agent_Templar @ Oct 22 2005, 06:33 PM)
I agree with Ixion, the word "ethereal" is played out in fantasy settings.
210502
...lusternia IS fantasy
Unknown2005-10-22 22:38:23
What exactly does the amulet do? I've gathered that it ressurects people besides Ixion, presumably when he chooses to do so, but what are the limitations? Are you going to be in the same physical location necessarily? Is it possible that you could do this while under various afflictions: paralysis, broken arms (one or both?), bound, and so on a so forth.
I'm just wondering because I don't want to have to touching people with an amulet if you're across the continent, or gripping it firmly if your arms are both laying on the ground.
Edit: Oh, and the relavent definitions of "ethereal" go something like this
1) "characterized by lightness and insubstantiality"
2) "of heaven or the spirit"
Double edit: Silly Munsia, Lusternia is reality. Everything is fantasy.
I'm just wondering because I don't want to have to touching people with an amulet if you're across the continent, or gripping it firmly if your arms are both laying on the ground.
Edit: Oh, and the relavent definitions of "ethereal" go something like this
1) "characterized by lightness and insubstantiality"
2) "of heaven or the spirit"
Double edit: Silly Munsia, Lusternia is reality. Everything is fantasy.
Ixion2005-10-22 22:46:32
Its limitations are for me to know and you to ponder.
Of course ethereal doesnt mean leafy, but the word is connotated to such because of its relation in the communes and demesnes, in my mind anyway. Since I'm the one dishing out the creds, my preference is the one we'll be using
Of course ethereal doesnt mean leafy, but the word is connotated to such because of its relation in the communes and demesnes, in my mind anyway. Since I'm the one dishing out the creds, my preference is the one we'll be using
Vix2005-10-23 00:58:24
Maybe if you post the description of the amulet it might help us?
Ialie2005-10-23 00:59:56
QUOTE(Ixion @ Oct 22 2005, 04:05 PM)
As a note, I hate the word ethereal. Anything remotely leafy is being rejected.
210482
Meh I quit just use a damned thesaurus
Unknown2005-10-23 01:27:12
First person:
Chanting demonically, you raise the amulet above you in a tightly clenched fist. Tendrils of dark energy burst out and wrap around the spirit of (person), causing (him/her/it) to writhe in silent agony as bone and flesh are rebuilt into restored life.
Second person:
Dark currents of energy blur the figure of Ixion as he begins chanting in an unknown tongue. As Ixion punches the air above him in a clenched fist, darkness bursts forth and pierces your being like iron needles. You close your eyes tightly and scream in utter agony as feeling returns to you in an instant. Exhaling a ragged gasp, you find yourself whole once again.
Third person:
Light is chased away from the hulking figure of Ixion as his chant forces a howling spirit back into life.
Chanting demonically, you raise the amulet above you in a tightly clenched fist. Tendrils of dark energy burst out and wrap around the spirit of (person), causing (him/her/it) to writhe in silent agony as bone and flesh are rebuilt into restored life.
Second person:
Dark currents of energy blur the figure of Ixion as he begins chanting in an unknown tongue. As Ixion punches the air above him in a clenched fist, darkness bursts forth and pierces your being like iron needles. You close your eyes tightly and scream in utter agony as feeling returns to you in an instant. Exhaling a ragged gasp, you find yourself whole once again.
Third person:
Light is chased away from the hulking figure of Ixion as his chant forces a howling spirit back into life.
Murphy2005-10-23 01:38:54
Invoking the ultimate power of Urlach upon %1, you bellow out a ritual, torturing the soul of %1. With the most unholy scream of agony, the pain on %1's soul lifts and you reanimate the corpse of %1. Finishing your ritual, you call down an aura of undeath upon %1, leaving him in your ultimate debt.
Your eardrums throb with pain as Ixion bellows out a string of harsh, gutteral words. Your muscles tense up in fear as %1's soul lets out an unholy scream of agony and you can hardly believe your eyes as Ixion begins to reanimate the corpse of %1. Letting out a final shout of triumph, Ixion completes the ritual and revives %1, calling down an aura of undeath as a reminded of %1's ultimate debt.
Beseeching the ultimate power of Urlach, Ixion bellows out a string of harsh, gutteral words causing your soul to scream out in abject agony. As the torture upon your soul becomes to much to bear and the pain threatens to tear apart your very existance, Ixion shouts out in triumph as your body becomes reanimated. Blinking about yourself, your feel a terrible aura plague your soul, reminding yourself of your ultimate debt to the awesome power of undeath.
Your eardrums throb with pain as Ixion bellows out a string of harsh, gutteral words. Your muscles tense up in fear as %1's soul lets out an unholy scream of agony and you can hardly believe your eyes as Ixion begins to reanimate the corpse of %1. Letting out a final shout of triumph, Ixion completes the ritual and revives %1, calling down an aura of undeath as a reminded of %1's ultimate debt.
Beseeching the ultimate power of Urlach, Ixion bellows out a string of harsh, gutteral words causing your soul to scream out in abject agony. As the torture upon your soul becomes to much to bear and the pain threatens to tear apart your very existance, Ixion shouts out in triumph as your body becomes reanimated. Blinking about yourself, your feel a terrible aura plague your soul, reminding yourself of your ultimate debt to the awesome power of undeath.
Aiwendil2005-10-23 02:38:18
First person:
Raising your amulet in front of you, you begin chanting monotonically. It glows for an instant before the soul of (name) fades into view. Taking this cue, you aim your amulet at (name), allowing rays of pure energy to escape and head straight for him. You cease your chanting and lower your amulet as (name) is bathed in a golden light, slowly returning to existence.
Third person:
You watch as Ixion raises his amulet up high, chanting in a low monotone. You blink as the soul of (name) appears. Without warning, he points his amulet at (name), bathing him in a golden light. Recovering from your shock, you notice that Ixion has ceased his ritual and (name) is lying in front him, looking very confused but very much alive.
Person brought back to life:
You feel suddenly drawn to the earth. Unable to resist, you return to the place where your cold body lies. As you reach it, you feel yourself being bathed in a warm light. You gasp as you snap back into your corpse and return to life. Opening your new eyes, you give Ixion a confused look before realising that you owe him an unpayable debt of gratitude.
EDIT: Changed "holy" to "golden". Deleted about soul wandering.
Raising your amulet in front of you, you begin chanting monotonically. It glows for an instant before the soul of (name) fades into view. Taking this cue, you aim your amulet at (name), allowing rays of pure energy to escape and head straight for him. You cease your chanting and lower your amulet as (name) is bathed in a golden light, slowly returning to existence.
Third person:
You watch as Ixion raises his amulet up high, chanting in a low monotone. You blink as the soul of (name) appears. Without warning, he points his amulet at (name), bathing him in a golden light. Recovering from your shock, you notice that Ixion has ceased his ritual and (name) is lying in front him, looking very confused but very much alive.
Person brought back to life:
You feel suddenly drawn to the earth. Unable to resist, you return to the place where your cold body lies. As you reach it, you feel yourself being bathed in a warm light. You gasp as you snap back into your corpse and return to life. Opening your new eyes, you give Ixion a confused look before realising that you owe him an unpayable debt of gratitude.
EDIT: Changed "holy" to "golden". Deleted about soul wandering.
Murphy2005-10-23 02:43:32
only thing there is ixion isn't holy or heavenly like
Verithrax2005-10-23 04:35:36
First Person:
Raising your amulet to the skies and suddenly slamming it on the ground, you can sense the stench of decay as $target's corpse is sucked into the moist earth. Moments later, a gasping and panting $target emerges, crawling his way out of his grave desperately.
Second Person:
Ixion raises his amulet to the skies and suddenly slams it to the ground as the overwhelming smell of decay fills your nostrils. The earth gives way below you, and you fall down into a shallow grave as the dirt, seeming nearly alive, buries you, filling your mouth as you scream wildly. Moments later, you claw your way out of the earth, screaming wildly and gasping for air as life is returned to you.
Third person:
Ixion raises his amulet to the skies and suddenly slams it to the ground as the powerful stench of decay rises up from the earth. $target's body is sucked into the dirt, being suddenly buried. Moments later, $target crawls out of his shallow grave, twitching, screaming, and gasping for air.
Raising your amulet to the skies and suddenly slamming it on the ground, you can sense the stench of decay as $target's corpse is sucked into the moist earth. Moments later, a gasping and panting $target emerges, crawling his way out of his grave desperately.
Second Person:
Ixion raises his amulet to the skies and suddenly slams it to the ground as the overwhelming smell of decay fills your nostrils. The earth gives way below you, and you fall down into a shallow grave as the dirt, seeming nearly alive, buries you, filling your mouth as you scream wildly. Moments later, you claw your way out of the earth, screaming wildly and gasping for air as life is returned to you.
Third person:
Ixion raises his amulet to the skies and suddenly slams it to the ground as the powerful stench of decay rises up from the earth. $target's body is sucked into the dirt, being suddenly buried. Moments later, $target crawls out of his shallow grave, twitching, screaming, and gasping for air.