Hey all,

I need a description for my ingame character and will pay with credits. Post here if interested, preferably with sample work.

As a bit of help for him:

Penitent Neltharoth (Male Master Viscanti).
He is 18 years old, having been born on the 15th of Estar, 114 years after the Coming of Estarra.

As you are a viscanti- are there any themes you're going for? Racial types included in your makeup as part of your background, etc.?

Hmm...

Well I want a tall and toned build. Skin is rough, hide-like midnight blue. Some areas of my skin glisten as if they were made of obsidian or sapphire.


The rest of my form is very Lucidian-like. I've got curved spikes protruding out of my shoulders and shin, and they look they are a blend of hide and midnight blue/black crystal. My hair is those spikes protruding from the back and sides of my head. I've also got 2 upper and lower fangs, though not openly visible unless I open my mouth.

Refer to the Lucidian picture and this http://www.strategyplanet.com/disciples2/u..._demonuther.gif

I'll leave the other facial features up to your discernment.

I'm not much of a writer, I was more trying to give others a reference point. It seems like you have a pretty decent start there- someone should be able to pull it together into something neat.

I feel sorry for your future mate. That'll be painful.

He is a male Master Viscanti and his very persona radiates with the darkness of night. His tall, lean form is a miasma of crystalline shards, glittering like a hide of crushed black diamonds... etc, etc.

So like.. how does a luicidian have a girlfriend/boyfriend. I mean like.. they'd get bored right?

Shoo, fly!

Good point, I'll scrap the spikes on the shin.

I'll do the rest of your description if you like what I have so far. If you're curious... Here's my own.

And keep in mind that I wasn't going for ominous or beautiful

Cairam's Description
She is a graceful elfen and seems shapely with a long, voluptuous form. Varying hues of green shimmer and shift beneath her skin, mere shadows trailing her steady flow of blood. Her eyes, violet irises rimmed with murky, bloody green, hold a vague, blank stare. Her brows, lashes and hair are white, almost translucent in its paleness. Framed about her face, the rest hangs loose past her waist, while tiny wisps catch on the air and snake about. Pointed green ears emerge through the snowy field, one slightly bent and awkward in appearance. Her lips give the impression of being glossy, as full and pouty as they are, but when they part, they reveal a glint of sharpened teeth. She is wearing a silver torc, a fiery red cloak, a leather vest, a pair of leather leggings, a pair of leather bracers, and a pair of sturdy leather boots.

Edit: Used to say "long, slender form". Slender was changed to voluptuous because Ashteru complained that Cairam was too skinny.

I changed what you specificed to make you more powerful looking and Lucidian-like. Enjoy.

He is a fiendish master viscanti and is covered in a glittering exoskeleton of living crystal that flexes and shifts with every movement. The midnight blue plates of crystal cover most of his body, fitted to his form like a suit of armour; black, pulsating veins beat just below the polished surface, lacing his form like a web. Visible between the joints of his exoskeleton, his body consists of a tough black hide that joins with his skeleton via a series of external nerve connections. His head is nearly invisible beneath his crystalline 'skull'. Twin openings near the center reveal a pair of bright white eyes that peer outward as though from a great distance, their faint glow illuminating his cold face. A lower opening reveals the gnarled, flaking lips of his mouth. Jutting from various places along his bone structure are outcroppings of pointed, serrated spikes, most prominantly a pair on each shoulder and a number of smaller skewers sweeping backwards over his head like some form of hair.

Woot! Thanks!

Anybody esle wanna give samples?