Got some good RP going where kUrt's all hawgy-dawg over this girl who has no idea he exists, so I wrote somn'.

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"Crushed Blueberries"


The smell of toffee, the colors of a northern light
Smoking cedarwood pipes, a midsummer night

Bangs like the ocean (Hair like a raven)
Dolphin-like motion (My hearts quiet haven)
A somber excuse (A lack of reply)
Two tear-stained cheeks (Beneath dry pair of eyes)

Blue babybreath bulbs,
A peach colored face
Pink lips and pink hips that tell of a taste,

Like licorice and oranges,
Like rose petals and leather seams,
Like crushed blueberries,
Like everything I need.

The tapestry of autumn, red-yellow and black
A poise without tension, tense but so slack

A flat footed walk (On gently curved feet)
In black boots that talk (From ankle to knee)
Silver banded fingers (A sweet festival tree)
Unpainted nails (Flicked carefully at me)

So beautiful and broken,
So disregarding of me,
Soft words and soft skin that heartbeat a pace,

Like quiet purrs made music,
Like a lover without greed,
Like crushed blueberries,
Like everything I need.

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- Percy
P.S. We should be together too

Oh yeah, feedback is welcomed. Ya bastards. ;P

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Other than that, it looks very nice, though I'm perhaps not the best judge of poetry.

It's a piece of crap...but only because you used gay as an insult.

oh sure, say he used gay as an insult, but don't mention that he is insulting non-gay people by saying they have no emotions...

Let's just say that there is a very large number of things that are wrong with that one line and leave it at that, mm?

We all know you breeders have no emotions...

Oh hypocrisy, how I love thee so .

It was just a joke.

With making jokes about minorities you just need to be careful that people will take it as a joke and not as you being close-minded, that's all. We're generally more sensitive about these things.

Especially nesting it in that sentence... I don't know, it's not much of a joke. For some places, perhaps, but it doesn't work quite so well here. I guess Laneth's right, we're a little more sensitive than you're used to.

Yeah. My apologies. It was more a crack on people who say gay as an insult and think that anything to do with emotions is deserving of that insult, like Daganev said. Same with the 7331-talk. I'm making fun of people like that.

But I'll refrain from that sort of thing in the future. Sorry again.

It's fine once we know you better I think. I mean, I run around making insults, but I am pretty sure everyone can tell I'm joking.

We all need a good slap in the face from time to time anyway!

(PS. The poem was good)

Aye, the poem is quite impressive. Send it IC, keep us posted on what happens!

Not a bad idea. I might do that.

I liked the poem it was very nice.

Hey thanks! , The fox girl with the pigtails in your signature is fo' sheeze.

All the people in the siggy are me. Ialie is a changeling.

I miss your animated siggy.

What do you think of my poem, Narsrim?

I like this guy.