Wow, these are fantastic... well done, Lisaera!

Are the demesne trans skills just damage based? If not..

Killee's body fails to withstand the wrath of Nature, his death ordained by Killer.

Or something better than that. Not that it will ever be seen.

Edit: Maybe foretold, rather than ordained.

I'd love to see a special one for Nightkiss along the lines of "So and So has been felled by the rapturous embrace and kiss of Princess of Shadows, Penelope Pendalopolous." instead of the generic asphyxiation or magic damage death.

Eeee no! You're not kissing them, just sucking the air out of their throat or something!

Draining lifeforce to be more specific. I'd like to see something special for Moonburst too.

Killee has been consumed by Mother Moon's power invoked by Killee.

Actually, that sounds kind of boring. :/

Killee has been splintered to death by killer

I think they all rock, but I'm not too fond of the magical-damage ones. So here are two suggestions for those:

Magic Damge:
Torak's flesh has been devoured by the wrathful magics of Nokraenom.
Torak has been torn apart by the eldritch invocations of Nokraenom.

*Toad Curse*

Killee has been viciously mutilated by the foot of Killer.

Sacraments Sacrifice! Pretty please?

I know its not strictly obeying the rules you gave, but something like:

has sacrificed his|her life for

Something identifying the person doing the sacrificing as sacrificing, not just dying to themselves, would be really nifty.

So... we don't get attack-specific messages like:

Amaru has been covered in sharp splinters by Kalodan.
PoorNewbie has been sacrificed by the curse of EvilNewbie's sickle.
Kalodan has been made into an ice sculpture by Vesar's Aquamantic prowess.
Vesar has been turned to stone through Stangmar's control of Geomancy.
Stangmar has been frozen to death at the end of Laxinova's staff.
Laxinova has been beaten into a pulp by Aiakon's twisted staff.
Aiakon has met a cold, hard death beneath Acrune's hailstorm.
Acrune has been smashed under Veonira's boulders.
Veonira has been bludgeoned to death by a troop of Verithrax's killer squirrels.

Some generic ones then:

Killee had his guts frozen solid by Killer. (Cold)
Killee's body has been broken and smashed by Murphy. (Bludgeoning)
Killee's body was emptied of blood by Verithrax. (Cutting)
Killee has been mangled and slashed to death by Verithrax. (Cutting)
Killee is now a pierced, disfigured corpse thanks to Verithrax. (Also cutting)
Killee's charred, burnt flesh has fallen before a school of lava fish. (Fire)
Killee has been disfigured beyond recognition through Rauros' powerful magic. (Magical damage)

Nokraenom those are awesome!
hmm maybe if they were a few guildspecific?
* soul has been deemed unworthy of existence by (random killing. maybe magic or some other sourcetype?)
* form has been forcebly eviscerated by the invocations/incantations of (for magic!)
* existence has been ordained futile by (maybe for death to undead by Radience?)
love-mimi

I know it must be difficult for those of you who play a text-based game for 10+ hours a day to use actual reading skills, but really, do try. I didn't write those rules for the fun of it, the only suggestions I will even bother to consider are those that fit them.

*rereads the rules...*
Ahh... I'll get back to you..
Meseiarch Simimi, Of The Razielian Priesthood has been mentally pwned by the excrusiating intellect of Lisaera, The Silver Goddess... You see the death occur at the forums 'Deathsight Messages' thread, page the second.
love-mimi

Sometimes, I just want to track you down and give you a snuggle.

Ok I do not see much of a problem with how mine read but if anyone would mind poiting it out so i won't make the same problem with these others I want to post, I would be ever so grateful...
love-mimi

om no good at this sort of thing but it would be great if someone could come up with one for tae'dae bearhug

"Jack has been crushed to death in the fatal embrace of Raguel."

Generic ones, anywho (just for fun, I haven't really seen any of the existing ones, and they're probably better than the crap I churn out):

"Jack is now nothing but a bloated corpse, owing to the poisonous fumes of Archmage Aiakon d'Murani." (Poison source)
"Jack has been roasted alive by the vengeful flames of some dracnari." (Fire source)
"Jack has been impaled by the piercing might of Kalas Ixion." (Cutting damage)
"Jack has been bled dry by the might of Kalas Ixion." (Bleeding to death)
"Jack's very bones have been crushed by the bludgeoning might of Dreadlord Murphy Carthan, Ruthless Widowmaker." (Blunt source)
"Jack's soul has been consigned to the Pits of Nil by the unholy powers of Accursed Torak, the Fist of Luciphage." (Specialized - Sacrifice/Wrack)
"Jack's soul has been purified in the Light of Celestia by the holy powers of Lord Amaru La'Saet, Radiant Darkness." (Specialized - Absolve)
"Jack's soul has been seared by the subtle magical evocation of Heresiarch Nokraenom d'Erlette." (Magic source)
"Jack has been summarily crushed by the foot of Narsrim d'Cente, Moonlit Avenger." (Specialized - Toadcurse stomp)
"Jack has been strangled to death by Kaervas d'Murani, the Ascendant Fury." (Asphyxiation, or however the hell it's spelled, source)
"Jack has been crushed underfoot by the steed of Warlord Daevos Feyranti, Marshall of Death." (Specialized - trample)

All I can think of for now.

*necro*

Toadcurse still gives "killee has been slain by misadventure," not even revealing who killed them or how they died Any chance we could get a deathsense for toadcurse, or even just have it use the generic crushing damage once?


EDIT: Since this is actually the wrong thread, I meant to reply in the general section thread of "OMG new deathsense messages!" Since I necroed the suggestions/changes thread instead, my suggestions for toadcurse's deathsense:

Killee has been squished beneath Killer's foot.
(or if possessives are bad: Killee has been squished beneath the foot of Killer)

Killee has been slain by the might of Killer's foot. (to parody the old deathsense messages)
(or if possessives are bad: Killee has been slain by the might of the foot of Killer)

Killee has croaked with the aid of Killer. (for bad puns)

Toadcurse isn't an "instant" kill, so I don't think a special message is possible (often have to stomp twice). But yeah, the generic crushing damage one should probably occur.