Help with Personal Descriptions.

by Viravain

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Xavius2006-04-19 01:12:30
Xavius' human form needs a description. There isn't an existing template. The basic idea is that he's never been able to fully change out of his merian form. Normally, this means he has eyes that are too round and too far off to the sides of his head, and just vague hints of merian coloration. It could take any reasonable form, though.

Oh, and we wub.gif you!
Viravain2006-04-19 01:49:18
QUOTE(B_a_L_i @ Apr 18 2006, 08:07 PM) 280381

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He is a glistening undead mugwump and has soft, nearly translucent flesh of a crimson hue that glistens moistly in the faintest flickers of light. Tiny black spatters of colour are speckled across his face and limbs, accompanied by dark, rhythmically pulsing veins that lie just beneath the surface of his skin. His frame is almost painfully slender, the crown of his head slightly curved in a manner that suggests his appearance is more akin to that a salamander than other amphibious creatures. The black, flattened orbs of a predator mark his gaze, perfectly suited to match a razor bound smirk made by the hundreds of sharp, tiny teeth lining the maw that is his mouth.
Ildaudid2006-04-19 02:04:45
Thank you I love it! wub.gif
Asarnil2006-04-19 02:08:07
QUOTE(Viravain @ Apr 19 2006, 10:43 AM) 280383

He is a menacing orclach and stands over ten feet in height, his sheer stature alone lending him an imposing presence. His skin is thick and mottled in appearance, gleaming white scar tissue standing out amidst the otherwise ashen flesh. Thickly knotted muscle lines his limbs, a faintly glowing tattoo of a blue phoenix inked upon his right arm in excruciating detail. Despite having pulled back his hair in a severe manner, a few wisps still manage to escape their bond to drift in front of inky black eyes set within a hardened face. His jaw is kept rigid, though multiple fangs escape the confines of his lips to transform his features into an eternal grimace.


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Thank you much muchly!
Penelope2006-04-19 02:53:48
I vote we mail her cookies and cheesecake.
Unknown2006-04-19 02:58:49
um.. I made a forum account just for this...

Here is my description.. I'm not sure how to make myself look very loboish.

She is a ferocious loboshigaru and is covered in a soft honey coloured fur.
Her muzzle is an elongated shape and is dotted with little brown spots of fur. Her eye colour would be obvious if only one could see through the long bangs that cover most of her slender face. A long bushy tail curls up behind her form which looks fit and muscular, yet not very much so.
Unknown2006-04-19 03:36:26
Maybe you can help with mine!
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She is a glistening mugwump and at first glance seems small and powerless. Yet
she conducts herself as though she were the general of some vast army, or the
princess of some important nation. Her pefectly white hair falls into snowy
spirals down her back, decorated with decaying flower pedals and rotting forest
vines, and a disturbing sight beneath her unevenly cut bangs warrents your
attention. For where her eyes should be there are none, only wisps of black
smoke that pool around her empty sockets. The shadowy tendrils snake their way
across her otherwise delicate features, slithering through her nostrils and her
mouth, spiraling down around her chin and neck only to disappear beneath her
robes. Her skin is unnaturally dark, a deep ebony that seems to seethe with the
shadows that gather strangely about her as if they were a mere extension of her
will. Her youthful body is slender, but well-toned, with shapely limbs and
sinuous curves, and unless your sight plays tricks on you from time to time, it
would seem as though the shadows about her give shape to a pair of torn and
jagged butterfly wings upon her back.



i want her to still be dark and shadowy, but more salamanderish
Viravain2006-04-19 03:42:38
QUOTE(Armenia @ Apr 18 2006, 10:58 PM) 280445

um.. I made a forum account just for this...

Here is my description.. I'm not sure how to make myself look very loboish.




She is a ferocious loboshigaru and is covered in honey coloured fur, deepening into a golden brown on each limb as well as her elongated muzzle. The same rich colour that distinguishes each paw also falls into her golden eyes in the form of thick, lustrous tresses so soft that it seems likely to be fur as well, rather than hair. Her entire frame is slender, made wiry with sleek muscles that ripple beneath her skin with every graceful movement, the product of keeping herself physically fit. Twin ears rise from her head, as well as a long, bushy tail that curls behind her form, all meticulously cared for and leaving her with a well groomed appearance.

If you decide you want more added, as I have absolutely no idea about your personality at all, simply ask.
Unknown2006-04-19 04:30:35
Oh, that's so pretty. I think it fits my character nicely.

I have the urge to run with the description and make little kid noises now. biggrin.gif
Unknown2006-04-19 05:26:55
ooer

thanks viravain!!

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Terenas2006-04-19 06:30:50
This sounds pretty cool. I've always wanted my character to be simple as to not stand out so I've never bothered making huge descriptions but it would be nice to have something longer than 3 lines.

Current description-

He is a regal aslaran and is of average height. His furs and hair are those of a light orange color with no outstanding traits. He stands tall and confident with an air of strength surrounding him.

I'd really like something that resembles a worn out and battered Blademaster from many battles.

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Thank you in advance. smile.gif
Shryke2006-04-19 08:23:41
Well. I've been brainstorming what I could do with a changeling description.. something like I take a whole different form, thinkin things like: a gorgog/ a crow person thingy/ or something like the blue lady on X-men but black... I thhink it's plausible, and if so any cool descriptions for something unique? Don't feel constrained by the afformentioned ideas, I just put them there to give you an idea of what I'm thinking of.. I would want to be humanoid, and preferably something on the darker side of the spectrum (even though saying I look like an angel would be interesting).
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Ekard2006-04-19 16:44:06
I would like one too.

I changed on Aslaran just recently and for now i have just this sad.gif

He is a regal aslaran titan and have silvery white fur and large eye that gleam like liquid mercury flecked with red. Small dark spots dapple his neck and back.

Feel free to make it much longer heh.
Viravain2006-04-19 16:48:36
QUOTE(Xavius @ Apr 18 2006, 09:12 PM) 280408

Xavius' human form needs a description. There isn't an existing template. The basic idea is that he's never been able to fully change out of his merian form. Normally, this means he has eyes that are too round and too far off to the sides of his head, and just vague hints of merian coloration. It could take any reasonable form, though.

Oh, and we wub.gif you!


Well, let's try all the same. Hmm.

He is a soft and targetable human and for the most part, seems to fit the normal appearance they hold. He is perhaps just slightly above average in terms of height, and his build is fit and lean, rather than laden down with bulky muscle. Curiously, faint blue hints can be seen along areas of his skin with greater blood flow, tinting his fingers slightly, and leaving part of his face with a slightly racoonish mask. His eyes are just to the side of being grotesque due to their size, placed slightly off to the sides of his head and perfectly round. This remains easily disguised behind a veil of hair however, which has been sheared short, but not enough to keep the strands from otherwise obscuring his features.
Viravain2006-04-19 17:13:13
QUOTE(Murphy @ Apr 18 2006, 11:39 AM) 280272

since Viravain loves the Murph so much, I've had the same description for so long, basically its comprised of the ur'guard champion helm, and a suit of fieldplate, the idea being you can't see him cause he's armour clad!

Feel free to do a funny/mocking one, although i know you will anyway



He is a regal undead aslaran and is clad almost from head to toe in armour, leaving his features shrouded behind the protective metals. Glowing faintly from behind a helm that obscures his features from view are clearly golden eyes that bleed into orange spikes, with a black slit that slices down through the center of the orbs. Rising to gargantuan proportions of both height and build, the frontal part of his field plate serves only to accentuate hard muscle, rather than simply create it from expert forging. The only part of his body not left to be clad is a thickly muscular tail, the dark brown fur fading into black as it flows behind him.
Murphy2006-04-19 17:18:12
He is a regal undead aslaran and not unlike something from one's worst nightmare. His face is covered by a helm made of shards of bones, melded together in a horrifying death mask. The slots for eyes are covered in jet black glass, and bony spikes erupt in symmertrical curved lines around the jaw. Enourmous horns jut out from the temples and a fanged mouth is set in a perpetual rictus grin on the visor. His body is covered in interlocking, taint-blackened plates of armour. Massive, wicked spikes jut out from the shoulders, knees, and elbows of this suit of gruesome fullplate. Centered upon his chest in a field of smooth obsidian, the visage of a skull presses through a crimson mask bearing the inscription Urlach. Etched across the entire surface of his body, runes depicting scenes of pain, death, and war interlace and glow a demonic red. His thick muscled tail flows out from the rear of his armour, occaisonally moving about


Thats me at the moment in full armour.

I wouldn't mind something similair, but a bit less of a deathly feel and more of an elemental burning fire, like a mean looking warrior but with somewhat of a theme of red hot fury

damn I got ninjad!
Verithrax2006-04-19 19:01:46
Might as well try. Here's mine:

He is a graceful elfen and is tall, standing higher than most of his kind. His
pale skin approaches a bone-white tone, and his body is lithe, with long arms
that end in small hands and spindly fingers, made for delicate work rather than
labour. His elfin face shows hawk-like features, and displays some age, his
somewhat hooked nose complementing the proeminent chin that is covered in a
black goatee. His sharp ears poke through his short, meticulously well-kept
hair.
Unknown2006-04-19 21:08:24
He is a noble merian lord and has a tall, strong and robust build. His scales have a light, shimmering blue tone, rough, with some small scars on his face and some burns on his arms and body, denoting time on the forge. His eyes are light blue like the midday sky with a calm face. On his head, a pair of fins grows from his forehead all the way back to his neck. Right above his eyes, he has a pair of fins that would look just like human eyebrows. His fingers and toes are webbed and clawed.

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Furien2006-04-19 23:09:57
Need a cool description for a Lucidian Aquamancer. All I can say is that she's colorful, being pretty much gem and all, but she's cold, devoid of most emotion, and generally goes off of hard logic. If that's anything to drive from, I'd be thankful. biggrin.gif

(She stares. A lot. Not in the, 'Zomg!' stare, but the contemplating stare. If that helps.)
Unknown2006-04-20 02:27:24
Here's mine. Hope you can help if you want:
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He is a fierce dracnari and and his scales are an eerie dark green , reflecting
the light so well they seem to glow and slither across his hide. His tail is
exceptionally long and can't seem to stay in one position, it constantly
extends, contracts and twists. His hairless face is angular and it maintains a
haughty expression. His circular eyes are a stunning orange, his dilated pupils
running vertically threw them. His eyes, though showing simplicity, also have
the flame of Dracnoris in them, roiling away. Thin, ebony-colored spines of
bone stick out of his thighs, they line his spine and are present most commonly
around his broad shoulders and around his neck. Although his isn't tall, he is
more to the lanky side, having rather thin, deft limbs. Thin tendrils of smoke
waft out of his nose, floating up and around in intricate patterns. He is
wearing a linked coral starfish bracelet, a pocketbelt, a pocketbelt, a
pocketbelt, a suit of elfen plate armour, and a blackened iron warrior great
helm.


Things like this make me love you all the more Viravain.