Fania2009-10-26 16:17:53
QUOTE (Nathaniel @ Oct 26 2009, 08:59 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Of course he could, Superman is a tool!
Don't start... please. You start and the arguments never ends.
Casilu2009-10-26 16:56:39
QUOTE (Fania @ Oct 26 2009, 09:17 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't start... please. You start and the arguments never ends.
Of course Batman could beat Superman, he has the cash to buy kryptonite.
Unknown2009-10-26 19:38:35
Green Lantern could beat BOTH of them, if he didn't have the imagination of a stewed prune.
Casilu2009-10-26 19:56:25
QUOTE (Kialkarkea @ Oct 26 2009, 12:38 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Green Lantern could beat BOTH of them, if he didn't have the imagination of a stewed prune.
Clicky.
Fern2009-10-26 21:23:29
QUOTE (Kialkarkea @ Oct 26 2009, 03:38 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Green Lantern could beat BOTH of them, if he didn't have the imagination of a stewed prune.
Or if he couldn't be beaten by anything yellow....
seriously.
banana > green lantern
Unknown2009-10-26 21:58:09
QUOTE (Fern @ Oct 26 2009, 05:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Or if he couldn't be beaten by anything yellow....
seriously.
banana > green lantern
seriously.
banana > green lantern
Nope. That was adressed in (Relatively)recent comics, so long as the lantern knows the source of the yellow impurity(Fear) and is able to overcome that, yellow is a non-issue. Now Red Rings are a bit of an issue, but as long as there's a blue ring nearby...
Casilu2009-10-26 22:01:49
QUOTE (Kialkarkea @ Oct 26 2009, 02:58 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nope. That was adressed in (Relatively)recent comics, so long as the lantern knows the source of the yellow impurity(Fear) and is able to overcome that, yellow is a non-issue. Now Red Rings are a bit of an issue, but as long as there's a blue ring nearby...
Then tomato > Green Lantern.
Unknown2009-10-26 22:48:54
QUOTE (casilu @ Oct 26 2009, 06:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Then tomato > Green Lantern.
No no, Red is fine. Red RING is not. Red RING can corrupt Green Ring. However, Green Ring can Empower Blue Ring to fight Red Ring.
Also, depending on whether Ion is in the Lantern or not...yeah.
Fern2009-10-27 02:02:40
waaay too complicated.
batman > green lantern
edit: only if he knows?
banana from behind > green lantern
batman > green lantern
edit: only if he knows?
banana from behind > green lantern
Unknown2009-10-27 02:07:21
QUOTE (Fern @ Oct 26 2009, 10:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
waaay too complicated.
batman > green lantern
edit: only if he knows?
banana from behind > green lantern
batman > green lantern
edit: only if he knows?
banana from behind > green lantern
Depends on the Incarnation. In some cases the Green Lantern ring protected the bearer from attacks even without the bearer knowing of the threat. GL is ohpea.
Saaga2009-10-27 10:52:08
Um, what was this thread about again?
Fania2009-10-27 15:17:27
Fern2009-10-27 18:49:04
I'm gonna repost my human description, since I never got any feedback on it.
She is an ordinary human with antlers and stands just a bit under four feet in height. Strawberry blond, tangled, fluffy hair grows in a wild cloud about her head and shoulders, small pieces of plants caught in the locks. Her face is round, and her features are slightly remniscent of a furrikin: wide amber eyes, a small snub nose that twitches as if searching for a scent, and a small pursed mouth. Painted onto the creamy dark tan of her face are curious markings, she has lined her eyes with a dark rust color, and from the middle of them, painted stripes down her face that reach her chin. Her athletic body is scratched here and there, as if she spent too much time in a briar patch, or climbing trees; and her fingers are stained with herbal colors.
She is an ordinary human with antlers and stands just a bit under four feet in height. Strawberry blond, tangled, fluffy hair grows in a wild cloud about her head and shoulders, small pieces of plants caught in the locks. Her face is round, and her features are slightly remniscent of a furrikin: wide amber eyes, a small snub nose that twitches as if searching for a scent, and a small pursed mouth. Painted onto the creamy dark tan of her face are curious markings, she has lined her eyes with a dark rust color, and from the middle of them, painted stripes down her face that reach her chin. Her athletic body is scratched here and there, as if she spent too much time in a briar patch, or climbing trees; and her fingers are stained with herbal colors.
Aerotan2009-10-27 21:28:00
I like the bit about the fingertips, but are face paints one of those 'nono' areas because of, well, facepainting? (Stag/Crow, I believe, but am likely wrong)
Everiine2009-10-27 22:50:26
QUOTE (Aerotan @ Oct 27 2009, 05:28 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like the bit about the fingertips, but are face paints one of those 'nono' areas because of, well, facepainting? (Stag/Crow, I believe, but am likely wrong)
Only if you are duplicating the ability patterns, I'd say.
Mihewi2009-11-08 16:23:47
My new Glom sheepkin. She's going to become my new main, I think. Been having more fun on her than I've had on either of my other characters. *shoves salamander shapeshifter and porcupine into a corner*
I wanted the description to be very straight-to-the-point because her personality's supposed to very straight-to-the-point. *nods*
She is a bouncing furrikin and closely resembles a small sheep in appearance.
Curly ivory wool, carefully groomed and fluffy, covers the majority of her body,
save for her arms, head, and legs, which are instead a dark chocolate brown.
Glazed eyes, the glossy brown colour of honey, are positioned on either side of
her head, just below her spade-shaped ears, which stick straight out in opposite
directions. All of her limbs end in cloven hooves and a woolly stub of a tail
protrudes from her rump.
Edit: Oh. I decided to use British spellings, so "colour" and "woolly" are both correctly spelled, believe it or not.
I wanted the description to be very straight-to-the-point because her personality's supposed to very straight-to-the-point. *nods*
She is a bouncing furrikin and closely resembles a small sheep in appearance.
Curly ivory wool, carefully groomed and fluffy, covers the majority of her body,
save for her arms, head, and legs, which are instead a dark chocolate brown.
Glazed eyes, the glossy brown colour of honey, are positioned on either side of
her head, just below her spade-shaped ears, which stick straight out in opposite
directions. All of her limbs end in cloven hooves and a woolly stub of a tail
protrudes from her rump.
Edit: Oh. I decided to use British spellings, so "colour" and "woolly" are both correctly spelled, believe it or not.
Bhiele2009-11-08 16:30:23
If this thread is still the one you can get description help and critique I would really appreciate some! I am feeling brain dead and am trying to do the description for Bhiele, a newly reincarnated trill. This is all I have so far. Beat it up, clean it up, suggest whatever! Thanks!!
Tall and slight of build, with a fragile bearing that retains a stately poise. Upon her head is a cap of downy puffing pin feathers, their colour a coppery red accented with grey. The wisps of down curl around to the cusps of her ears and frames her delicate facial structure. Her eyes are over-large and glistening like molten gold set above a tiny refined nose. Her mouth is rounded, full-lipped yet oddly ashen that obscures what possible beauty she may possess. Rising above her diminutive shoulders are wings that bear a unique pattern in shades of reds and grey.
Tall and slight of build, with a fragile bearing that retains a stately poise. Upon her head is a cap of downy puffing pin feathers, their colour a coppery red accented with grey. The wisps of down curl around to the cusps of her ears and frames her delicate facial structure. Her eyes are over-large and glistening like molten gold set above a tiny refined nose. Her mouth is rounded, full-lipped yet oddly ashen that obscures what possible beauty she may possess. Rising above her diminutive shoulders are wings that bear a unique pattern in shades of reds and grey.
Mihewi2009-11-08 16:45:51
QUOTE (Bhiele @ Nov 8 2009, 10:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
If this thread is still the one you can get description help and critique I would really appreciate some! I am feeling brain dead and am trying to do the description for Bhiele, a newly reincarnated trill. This is all I have so far. Beat it up, clean it up, suggest whatever! Thanks!!
Tall and slight of build, with a fragile bearing that retains a stately poise. Upon her head is a cap of downy puffing pin feathers, their colour a coppery red accented with grey. The wisps of down curl around to the cusps of her ears and frames her delicate facial structure. Her eyes are over-large and glistening like molten gold set above a tiny refined nose. Her mouth is rounded, full-lipped yet oddly ashen that obscures what possible beauty she may possess. Rising above her diminutive shoulders are wings that bear a unique pattern in shades of reds and grey.
Tall and slight of build, with a fragile bearing that retains a stately poise. Upon her head is a cap of downy puffing pin feathers, their colour a coppery red accented with grey. The wisps of down curl around to the cusps of her ears and frames her delicate facial structure. Her eyes are over-large and glistening like molten gold set above a tiny refined nose. Her mouth is rounded, full-lipped yet oddly ashen that obscures what possible beauty she may possess. Rising above her diminutive shoulders are wings that bear a unique pattern in shades of reds and grey.
Grammatical errors. "Frames" should be "frame." Wisps frame, not wisps frames. "Glistening" should be "glisten."
Stuff that's really up to you but could probably be improved. 1) Overly large might be better than over-large. 2) Eyes like molten gold are extremely cliche, but that's perfectly fine if you don't mind it being cliche. 3) "Unique pattern" is incredibly vague. I can't picture what that would look like. Maybe try to describe the pattern instead of just saying it's unique.
Edit: Also. The mouth sentence throws me for some reason. It could be switched around and structured better, probably.
Bhiele2009-11-08 16:59:18
QUOTE (Mihewi @ Nov 8 2009, 04:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Grammatical errors. "Frames" should be "frame." Wisps frame, not wisps frames. "Glistening" should be "glisten."
Stuff that's really up to you but could probably be improved. 1) Overly large might be better than over-large. 2) Eyes like molten gold are extremely cliche, but that's perfectly fine if you don't mind it being cliche. 3) "Unique pattern" is incredibly vague. I can't picture what that would look like. Maybe try to describe the pattern instead of just saying it's unique.
Edit: Also. The mouth sentence throws me for some reason. It could be switched around and structured better, probably.
Stuff that's really up to you but could probably be improved. 1) Overly large might be better than over-large. 2) Eyes like molten gold are extremely cliche, but that's perfectly fine if you don't mind it being cliche. 3) "Unique pattern" is incredibly vague. I can't picture what that would look like. Maybe try to describe the pattern instead of just saying it's unique.
Edit: Also. The mouth sentence throws me for some reason. It could be switched around and structured better, probably.
I wrote it in note pad, I should have checked for errors before I posted it. I appreciate your help! And eww, I don't want to be cliche, I was trying to think of bird like eyes...I will fix that part. Good idea on describing the pattern for my wings. I was going to add more information, but I didn't want to be a glamor bird type person after reading the help file that says they are usually silver or brown. I usually tweak my descriptions for ages before I settle. I literally -just- reincarnated and needed something fast. Thanks so much! Any ideas on non-cliche birdy-like eyes?
Bah, what a day to reincarnate when I feel so uninspired and writers blocked on a decent description.
Ok- changed up a couple things, still not sure what to do with the eyes and the feather pattern of the wings....
Tall and slight of build, with a fragile bearing that retains a stately poise. Upon her head is a cap of downy puffing pin feathers, their colour a coppery red accented with gray. The wisps of down curl around to the cusps of her ears and frame her delicate facial structure. Her eyes are overly large and wide set, they are amber in colour yet ameliorate between copper and gold tones. Her mouth is large and full, though her lips are ashen. Her skin is pallid lending her face a monochromatic coloring that is only relieved by her eyes and feathering.
** Rising above her diminutive shoulders are wings that bear a unique pattern in shades of reds and grey. ** Still figuring out the wings thing….
Aerotan2009-11-08 21:33:19
Remember that your description will start with "She is a feathered trill and "