She is a shaggy igasho and shows distinct signs of orclach and elvish ancestry. Pointed grey ears shyly poke through her immaculate albescent fur. Thin cuspids press gently against her ripe lips. Her bosom reflects the large size of her race, though her total stature may be limited by her mixed heritage, and flows into her healthy contours. A bittersweet floral aroma clings to her healthy and athletic body, somehow akin to her smile.

..........damn you, I was trolling. though, thats not bad.

I know

Had this description for gawd knows how long, wondering if i should change anything with it...?

He is a regal aslaran and quite tall for that of his kin and well kempt for his
age. His well muscled frame is covered for its entirety with a thick, soft
orange fur, except for the white across his chest and the streaks of grey, which
also seem to be going white, that run the down his body, from his greying muzzle
with leathery brown long whiskered nose, to the tip of his broad swaying tail,
his large bushy mane is of a deeper orange than his fur, with streaks of white
and grey throughout, and has been braided in several parts and set with ritual
beads and gems of his tribe. His long, sinewy limbs show of a long life of work
and combat, large paws are scarred showing patches of fur missing on top and
scar lines on the under padding, but his claws still look as sharp as if he were
in his prime. Sharp green cat eyes wander constantly picking every detail, but
unable to focus on a single item for more than a moment, longears, with even
longer stray white hairs, are always pricked up to listen to all that goes on
around him.

Hintaro, your signature makes me squeee.

Also, tweaked my description for Aeral. Added hair and a tail. Not sure I like the hair. Oh, and I grew three inches, and the way those scars are described is different. Thoughts?:

She is a regal aslaran and holds herself proudly with a sort of mischievious air about her. Her entire body vibrates slightly, as if controlling the urge to bounce up and down. Her thick, mid-length midnight fur is tinted with flecks of gray-blue around her ears, face, tail and soft underbelly, a sharp contrast to violet eyes streaked with icy blue that dart around warily. Straight black, mane-like hair streaks down to the tops of her shoulders, giving her more of a human appearance despite the fur, and her canine-like snout slopes to a distinctly feminine feline nose, displaying her heritage of loboshigaru, but also the dominant aslaran blood in her. A long, inky tail stretches out with a little puff of fluffy fur at the end of it. Whiskers tinted blue show her close relation to water despite her race, on either side of a mouth that reveals white daggers. Her pointed ears are large but feminine, though made more for the ability to hear than for a pleasurable appearance. She is tall for her race and gender, towering at approximately 6'8", and leans toward the chubby side, but is overall well toned. Full breasts indicate her having grown into adulthood. Various tiny scars decorate her body in the form of paler fur, along with three dominant marks across her neck which are obvious by the lines of missing fur, clean and smooth from the bite of a blade, showing her vulnerability during combat. The symbol of Lady Terentia is borne proudly on her right shoulder, branded into her skin and fur for life. She stands tall as a strong yet modest individual.

This sentence could use some full stops in it. Try breaking it up into a couple more sentences instead of one really big one.

Erk.

Can't believe i didn't notice that.
Change made.
Cheers.

I updated my description. Figured it was time.

He is a feathered cloud trill and and is of tall and slender build. His features are stern and serious, despite the smooth aesthetics of their construction. Though slender, his jaw somehow conspires with his high-set, noble cheekbones to give a contemplative, sober appearance. Deep blue eyes glint coldly with intelligence and are surmounted by long eyelashes and arching, expressive eyebrows, both of which appear to be downy feathers rather than hair. Mirroring these downy adornments, soft and downy brown and ruddy-gold feathers tipped with silver crown his head, sweeping back to the nape of his neck where they are bound by a simple golden band inset with a glimmering beryl. His wings, though, draw the eye the most. Sleek and glossy, they are of the same colour as his headfeathers and arch high above his head, stretching much wider than his outstretched arms when unfurled and falling nearly to his feet when folded. He is more lithe and agile than muscular, and his movements are touched with grace.

For those not in the loop (it's a rather large loop)) here's Syrii's most recent description. Any advice or criticism is welcome.

Anyone need descriptions written? I'm itching for something to do.

Also, not the place to say, but if you want a public tailoring design done up I'd be happy to.

Here you go:

She is a feathered cloud trill and the wings that sprout from her back are the
color of old gold with black bands near the bottom edge. Feathers of the same
color sweep back from her head in a sharp crest. She has a soft face with young
features and a slim body that moves in a self conscious manner.

She's not really young anymore, and as a higher up, she should have a sense of confidence and authority. Oh, and her eyes are basic bird color, I never got around to making a face. Just make stuff up where you need to, if I don't like it I can just change the adjectives around. I'm really good with improving on what other people have written, I just can't make something from scratch for myself.

She is a feathered cloud trill and has a rather stern look about her. Her regal wings are of an elegant old gold color and feature black bands near the bottom edge. Feathers of the same colors sweep back from her head in a sharp crest. Her soft, wise face features deep eyes that vary from dark brown to golden depending on her mood, and a black pointed beak. She stands at approximately and has an air of authority around her, her eyes surveying her surroundings with a serious look.

Not sure where to go with this... tiired, and I suck at trill descriptions because I'm not quite sure how exactly they look.

Very tall, pretty in a fine-boned, aesthetic sort of way. Feathers instead of hair, and little enough of that. No indication of a beak in any mob descriptions I've seen. Typically move gracefully just because they've got hollow bones and weigh next to nothing in comparison with, say, a human or even an elfen.

She is a feathered cloud trill and, by most measures, incredibly sexay. Inviting wings of gold wrap around her supple, lithe frame, and when she walks, panties drop--

Ok ok for reals:

She is a feathered cloud trill and the wings that sprout from her back are the color of old gold with black bands tipped near the bottom edge. Feathers of the same color sweep back from her head in a sharp crest. She has a stern disposition characterized by cool, pale blue eyes that sweep the room in a studied fashion as her thin pink lips purse in a pensive manner. Each step she takes commands a quiet and unshakable confidence.

What happens when she's sleepin? I mean, I'm not terribly worried, I break that rule, but still?

I do like that part about the inviting gold wings, though... not really appropriate for here though.

Also, I like this.

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So, I herd that u wuld liek right a description, write?

Here's wut I have so far:

She is a regal aslaran and just has the most aweshome bewbs, oh and she holds herself all sexily with a mischievious air. Her entire body vibrates liek one of dem awesome dil- er. Gorgeously sexy fur covers her entire body except her bewbs, I think it's black. Maybe it has liek flecks of blue in it too. She haz these gorgeous eyes like pools of water except coloured violet, but they also have snowflakes in them. Her long black hair would make any fetishist swoon over it and would just totally liek make any guy happy. Her nose is sorta like a dog but not really since she's aslaran. Her long tail wraps sexily around her leg and she liek oozes with slinky sexiness. Her whiskers are blue or something, and her teeth are gorgeous pearly white daggers. She has cute little ears that are definitely making her look like a neko. She's tall and oh so sexy like a dominatrix and slender and wuld look great in a bikini. Oh, and did I mention her bewbs are HUGE? She has a tattoo of that sexy Lady Terentia on her back, adding to the sex factor by +10. She is a proud sex addict.

A masterpiece. Bravo.

My city floats, your logic is invalid.

EDIT: Also I've been doing too many play costume designs lately and it's easier to get away with in those.

Why thank you, I pride myself in horribly wonderful descriptions.