He is a sinuous illithoid and is covered in leathery skin a sickly shade of grey, the yellow veins just below the surface of his skin creating ridges across his features. He has an air of confidence despite his especially short stature, though he is lean with sinewy muscles. His bistre hued eyes are hard, slanted slightly and given to a severe coldness, although there are wrinkles on his forehead, surrounding his mouth, and crows feet around his eyes. When he smiles the small bumps that form his nose and the ghastly scar that mars across his face twists, made more horrifying by the rows of razor sharp teeth that have opened various wounds around his mouth over time.

edit: this is just my take. I didn't include any fidgeting bits or the bit about a glimmer of compassion that occasionally flares up, because when you first come across someone you won't know their personality - they'll have to convey that in emotes and roleplay. And if his mouth is full of razor sharp teeth I'm gonna assume that they aren't perfectly aligned but rather pretty gnarly and twisted so it would make sense that he'd probably be biting his own lips and tearing the inside of his cheeks a new one daily. I wasn't entirely sure about the nose and bumps (honestly when I think illithoid noses I think lord valdemort's nose - just a single smooth bump where his nose should be). But I got a cool image of this guy smiling, trying to be nice, and this horrible leathery skin just twisted with this awful scar that slashes across his face making it even worse! A pretty fun concept.

edit2: I also removed the bit about his tattoo because... well, he can just favour that particular tattoo in-game if he wants, or he can add it back in, whatever works!

Also kept it short and sweet. Short and sweet descs are more likely to get read and be understood clearly. Reading a desc that is 10 sentences long ensures that very few people read it and even fewer people get a good picture.

She is a nimble faeling and stands at just under two feet tall. Her slender body gives her the appearance of being a child, though you can tell from her structure that she is fully mature. Tantalizing cerise eyes complement her pale skin tone pleasantly, her lips painted with a pale rouge. Hair the colour of pinkish flames is held back by simple pins, out of her face and cascading down her back in a wave, each lock shining with a different tone of magenta. Ravishing butterfly wings of gold, rose and black grace her back, stretching up and down into four elegant points, the markings across them resembling a wild inferno of rich caramel.

Comments? She's my pretty character.

He is a trill and has a gaunt physique and look. Dark, soot grey feathers cover his wings and "hair", the tips of his wings tipped a stygian ebony. His face is rather soft for a trill, contrasting the stark green of his eyes against pale skin, appearing almost luminscent. His body has a long, almost boney appearance to it, with a narrow body that is shadowed by his large wings.

Comments? She's my pretty character.

She is a nimble faeling and stands at just under two feet tall. Her slender body gives her the appearance of being a child, though you can tell from her structure that she is fully mature. Tantalizing cerise eyes complement her pale skin tone pleasantly, her lips painted with a pale rouge. Hair the colour of pinkish flames is held back by simple pins, out of her face and cascading down her back in a wave, each lock shining with a different tone of magenta. Ravishing butterfly wings of gold, rose and black grace her back, stretching up and down into four elegant points, the markings across them resembling a wild inferno of rich caramel.

Yes. I want to know who she is. While we're at it, I wanted to know if anyone can see any big discrepancies in this trill description, or what I have of it. (Mind you I was quite tired while writing this. )

He is a trill and stands a narrow, wiry male who is perpetually clouded in the shadow of his own sooty grey wings, the tips of each feather a charcoal black. More feathers cap the crown of his head, drawing attention to his luminous green eyes and enhancing the ashen hue of his skin. Long, tapered fingers are calloused and slightly distorted through repeated motions, leading up to sinewy forearms and a concaved upper body that slumps forward.

I left out the "hair" comment because I thought it added a sort of ridiculous tone to the rest of the description (ruined it, if you will). I imagine this trill is not someone who is much of a joker so tried to convey that in the tone of voice of the description. Trills also don't have anything that is relate-able to hair, really, just a cap of feathers that crowns their head.

I noted that you used the word 'Stygian', but 'Stygian' always seemed like a funny word to see in IRE games since we basically have no equivalent of the Styx river and it always appeared, to ME, to be a pronoun and so needed to be capitalised, and 'stygian ebony' seems redundant... but that is purely my opinion, and totally debatable. One can also argue that 'charcoal black' is redundant as well, but ehhhh. Whatever. You may use whatever phrase you'd like, but I left it out in my example. I felt drawn to mention it being a raven colour but didn't know how you'd feel about that >:D.

This is a very short description. As is I think it stands fine even for being so short, but you could certainly go into more detail regarding his facial features. I added in some extra features regarding his hands and such because, well, that's what came to my mind's eye... His wings being very heavy for his fairly weak body, he basically feels like the world is constantly on his shoulders (and he wouldn't be exactly wrong, either). You're welcome to request I change it, or change it yourself.

She is a nimble faeling and stands at just under two feet tall. Her slender body gives her the appearance of being a child, though you can tell from her structure that she is fully mature. Tantalizing cerise eyes complement her pale skin tone pleasantly, her lips painted with a pale rouge. Hair the colour of pinkish flames is held back by simple pins, out of her face and cascading down her back in a wave, each lock shining with a different tone of magenta. Ravishing butterfly wings of gold, rose and black grace her back, stretching up and down into four elegant points, the markings across them resembling a wild inferno of rich caramel.

I could use some help with my own description. So as to add to it.

Hikage is a Furrikin and he is covered from head to toe in sleek fur of a magnificent glossy burnt orange color with parts being a soft light tan instead. He has the build of a runner, slim with tone and almost no fat under his coat of fur, while standing at three foot four inches. His face has soft, but firm, angles accented by the soft light tan fur covering his lower face starting at the lower half of his cheek bones and nose. This change carries down the front of his neck and into his clothes. His has a similar change on his hands and feet only the fronts of his paws are light tan. The tips of his ears and tail a shiny black just like his nose. His eyes are a shocking blue with veins of turquoise green in them to help express the wonders he holds in his mind. He walks with a sense of pride and carries himself as a proud example of his race.

pointers?

But what kind of cute furry animal is he?

I want him to have fox like features but no muzzle. Ears on the top/sideish of his head and of course lips. Definitely don't want a muzzle. His is bard so maybe calluses on his "paws". Thinking maybe have a cross between paws and hands like the pads from animal paws.

Why not keep the paws and just have thumbs? I'm thinking the panserbjørne from His Dark Materials.