Oka, here's my kraptastic furrikin descript that I'm using now

He is a bouncing furrikin and is coverded in thick, red vulpine fur. His face is has a lovely fox like snout and his chin has soft white fur. At the end of his snout is a little black nose. His leafy green eyes shine with mischieve and cunning, a testament to animal from which he apears to descend. Two lithe arms extend from his shoulders, each of which peaks with a set of razor sharp claws.

Clothes (cause sometimes it's nice to mention a little)
He is wearing a pair of black shoes, an amethyst stud through his left ear, a simple silver hoop through his left eyebrow, a ring of waters, an amethyst stud through his left ear, an amethyst stud through his left ear, a tawdry gloves, a warm tulip of dawn, a diamond ring set in marble, a platinum chain necklace, and sea-blue robes.

She is a graceful elfen and is slightly short for her race, with fair skin. At
a first glance, she might be mistaken for a human, if it wasn't for the small
points at the tip of her ears. Her hair is an odd color, bright blue, and falls
down to her middle back, and is quite wave. Her bangs cover most of her
forehead. Her bright blue eyes mix seamlessly with her hair. She is of
moderate, and "proportionate" build and figure. She is wearing sea-blue robes,
a moonstone and garnet ring, a black studded belt, a pair of fingerless crimson
gloves, and a pair of blue shoes.

Well. There's my description. Any ideas/suggestions as to what to do?

She is a graceful elfen and is slightly short for her race, with fair skin. At
a first glance, she might be mistaken for a human, if it wasn't for the small
points at the tip of her ears. Her hair is an odd color, bright blue, and falls
down to her middle back, and is quite wave. Her bangs cover most of her
forehead. Her bright blue eyes mix seamlessly with her hair. She is of
moderate, and "proportionate" build and figure. She is wearing sea-blue robes,
a moonstone and garnet ring, a black studded belt, a pair of fingerless crimson
gloves, and a pair of blue shoes.

Well. There's my description. Any ideas/suggestions as to what to do?

She is a graceful elfen and is slightly short for her race, with fair skin. At
a first glance, she might be mistaken for a human, if it wasn't for the small
points at the tip of her ears. Her hair is an odd color, bright blue, and falls
down to her middle back, and is quite wave. Her bangs cover most of her
forehead. Her bright blue eyes mix seamlessly with her hair. She is of
moderate, and "proportionate" build and figure. She is wearing sea-blue robes,
a moonstone and garnet ring, a black studded belt, a pair of fingerless crimson
gloves, and a pair of blue shoes.

Well. There's my description. Any ideas/suggestions as to what to do?

She is a graceful elfen and stands slightly shorter than most of her own race, her figure fair-skinned and her build proportionate to her height. Soft waves of vibrant azure hair cascade past fair shoulders and down to the middle of her back, and nearly conceal the tapering of her ears to the small but unmistakable points that distinguish her from a human. Her bangs are arrayed artlessly across most of her forehead, the bright strands framing almond-shaped eyes that mirror the exact hue of her hair.

http://floangel.skyblog.com/pics/109183496_small.jpg Is a picture with the hair style. Any chance you have an ideas on how to describe this?

I was just wondering how my own description is. Well, here it is:

She is a ferocious loboshigaru and is a healthy, young animal. Coarse, black fur
coats her wiry limbs thickly, the fur on her back liberally interspersed with
white guard hairs. The shape of her muzzle, broad and long, as well as the
smallness of her head strongly hint at a wolfish heritage. Closely set to the
muzzle, and half hidden by stray strands of fur, are a pair of are deep-set eyes
of a smokey grey in colour. Small nubs of gritty black claws tip each of her
squat digits, their edges dulled with much use. A bushy tail, slightly curved,
grows from her posterior, while her legs are leanly muscled and end with broad
paws. Her face is painted with rays of sunshine. She is wearing an inky black
skullcap, a moonstone and garnet ring, a plush red blanket, delicate robes of
ebony spider silk, and a silver torc.

Her face is painted with rays of sunshine.
Spice it up a bit maybe?
example:
Her face is painted with shimmering rays of golden sunshine.

I like it! I'm in no way an expert, but if I had to suggest a few things, I'd do this: (take it or leave it! your choice)

Change
Coarse, black fur coats her wiry limbs thickly, the fur on her back liberally interspersed with white guard hairs.
to
Thick, coarse, black furcoats her wiry limbs, and the fur on her back is liberally interspersed with white guard hairs.

also
are a pair of are deep-set eyes of a smokey grey in colour.
to
deep-set eyes which are a smokey grey colour

while her legs are leanly muscled and end with broad paws.
to
while her lean muscled legs end with broad paws

lastly
Her face is painted with rays of sunshine.
Spice it up a bit maybe?
example:
Her face is painted with shimmering rays of golden sunshine.

Thats a Druid ability, Shaeden.

Thats a Druid ability, Shaeden.

She is a nimble faeling and is curiously odd-looking for her race. Her short
stature is corded with lean muscles, while her dark skin is lightly coated with
thin strands of silky, black hair. Where her wrists finish and hands should
emerge are instead dextrous paws with nimble digits. Gritty, charcoal nails tip
each finger, while the palms are rough with worn callus'. Her legs are affected
similarly, with fetlocks growing along the back of the calf, and the foot shaped
like a wolf's paw. Sprouting from between her shoulders blades are a pair of
iridescent wings, fragile in appearance and their shape not unlike those of a
dragonfly's wings.
.
Her face is painted with blue lightning bolts. She is wearing a plush red
blanket, delicate robes of ebony spider silk, an inky black skullcap, a thick
ring of carved emerald, a moonstone and garnet ring, a rainbow coloured ring, a
simple gold ring, and an onyx and bloodstone necklace.

He is a nimble faeling but not really he's just a loboshigaru with fast eq and small size.