It has the feel of a monologue read out before a feature film, nicely done 
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.You didn't point out my mistakes, and I didn't bother to check it for them. 
It was written over about an hour, between taking phone calls, and though I pride myself in being able to write very well (at least in regards to spelling and grammar), I tend to make one or two mistakes on the first try, if I don't check it.
Wasn't trying to steal his spotlight either, just thought I'd expand upon the idea, Guido's a bright kid, love his writing. I figured I'd write something in the same style, and not completely deviate and have a ego party.
It was written over about an hour, between taking phone calls, and though I pride myself in being able to write very well (at least in regards to spelling and grammar), I tend to make one or two mistakes on the first try, if I don't check it.Wasn't trying to steal his spotlight either, just thought I'd expand upon the idea, Guido's a bright kid, love his writing. I figured I'd write something in the same style, and not completely deviate and have a ego party.
quote]Well, you were continually denying it in some other thread I can't be bothered to dig up, and you said that you wouldn't reveal your true Lusty identity, AND it's kind of sad to make an alt on the forums as well.
You were denying it pretty heavily, and I didn't want to join the horde of people saying you were Sano, because I don't give a flying
You were denying it pretty heavily, and I didn't want to join the horde of people saying you were Sano, because I don't give a flying
My toooopic. 
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