Maximum word count is 17,000.

If it had been 17,000 mim I would have fainted. I can't write that much. I'll print it out and have at it myself.

--I like it, and I really want to read the 2nd part!

Thank you. Hopefully i'll have the second part written shortly. I've been a bit out of it lately. Hopefully I'll get back into it quickly.

If anyone has any comments, about anything that was unclear or needs expanding, don't be shy I handle criticism very well, and promise only to bite off the heads of certain people