Broken

by Gelo

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Gelo2006-12-28 23:33:33
Im not sure where this will go. I think the Creative arts section is for IC stuff because its under Life in Lusternia so I posted it here.

My first, and probably last open poetry.
Or something, I'm not really sure if it is considered poetry unsure.gif
I dont know if the grammar is perfect, and honestly I'm not sure if I said something there that I've read somewhere else. I was too dizzy to think. Im posting it here because, well.. Im not really sure. I guess I just want to be heard.

http://larkspur_of_july.blogs.friendster.c.../12/broken.html

NOTE: I made the blog two days ago and I couldn't put my name in it because I dont want other people to know its me. The first name I saw was Elryn, so there...

EDIT: The one in the bottom is from TooManyToothpicks (deviantart.com). No it wasnt done by me. I drool in envy at his poetry.
Reiha2006-12-31 19:16:55
Nice, although it makes me feel a tad sad sad.gif Guess that poem is about that particular someone. comfort.gif Would of commented on the blog but I am too lazy to make an account tongue.gif