Chapter VI: Forefront of Battle

by Unknown

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Unknown2007-05-24 20:30:06
QUOTE(Druken @ May 24 2007, 04:25 PM) 411573
Gag me.
And, just to note-

You pegged Druken pretty well for the most part. He and Shamarah rarely ever talk, and I'd probably have subbed Akrzrael/Urazial in for him in that regard, but it's a cool story. Druken isn't a very chipper person, either, but I suppose it's good for the story! I can't wait to find out what happens. smile.gif


Trust me. No one will ever see what's coming. ^^ *dramatic music General Hospital style* Dun-dun-dunnnnnn!!!! scream.gif
Unknown2007-05-24 21:48:59
I enjoyed the read. It's a nice new perspective on the various characters.

*please let Synl lead the frontal assault in a mad, screaming rage*
Unknown2007-05-25 21:09:05
After a rather long discussion with Viravain and Shayle over messanger/notes, I have changed "Night be merciful" to "By the gods" as it seems to be more general. I want to keep the authentic feel that Night is without mercy or what-have-you, at least enough to make Glomdoring believable in this particular chapter. grin.gif I had thought about using, "By Avechna's right tit!" but I thought that was going too far. ;P