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Unknown2008-10-01 10:25:53
Right, since there is interest I'll make a topic for it:

I'm still looking for ideas for my personal emote / pose. I really... don't have any. I'm going to be honest and admit that I'm very picky but that is also why I'm offering 100 credits to the person that can come up with a satisfying idea for it. smile.gif

I want it to fit with what Aesyra currently has, ie mostly centered around her zap and (new) shout (once I finish that).

The zap involves her conjuring up an electric hawk and throwing it at people. I can't log in right now for the exact messages, I will add them here though once I get home (roughly 5 hours).

The (new) shout will probably be something along the lines of "With a chilling calm, Aesyra's voice cuts across the skies, "blah"." (If I get it approved et all).

So basically, her "theme" is storm, lightning, electricity etc. and I want the emote / pose to fit into that. I thought about her summoning a hawk as emote and having it sit on her shoulder as pose, but I sort of doubt that would get approved. It's also basically the exact same as her zap.. so yeah.

PS: Charune, Serenwile and Shofangi are also themes.

Any and all ideas welcome! biggrin.gif
Esano2008-10-01 10:32:19
Placeholder!

Nah, not really, but I'll work on one. Remember, choose the pose you like most, because the emote you can just alias.
Unknown2008-10-01 10:34:29
QUOTE(Esano @ Oct 1 2008, 12:32 PM) 565275
Placeholder!

Nah, not really, but I'll work on one. Remember, choose the pose you like most, because the emote you can just alias.


I know! That's why I want something really neat, and that in turn makes it so hard to find something. Did I ever tell you that I only got my zap set recently because I could never think of something awesome ever since it was introduced? sad.gif
Esano2008-10-01 10:37:53
Any limits as to length on either of them?
Moiraine2008-10-01 10:38:48

Aesyra crosses her arms across her chest.

Aesyra is here. Deal with it.


Pay up! tongue.gif
Unknown2008-10-01 10:52:38
QUOTE(Esano @ Oct 1 2008, 12:37 PM) 565278
Any limits as to length on either of them?


None that I'm aware of. I can msg Estarra though and ask if there are any game restrictions. (Once I can log on. 5 hours to go..)
Unknown2008-10-01 10:53:02
QUOTE(Moiraine @ Oct 1 2008, 12:38 PM) 565279

Aesyra crosses her arms across her chest.

Aesyra is here. Deal with it.


Pay up! tongue.gif


Zomg! You totally win! Sorry guys, contest is over already! biggrin.gif

PS: J/K
Esano2008-10-01 11:01:45
Here's a start. I'd actually work on it a lot more before submitting it, of course (I'd almost completely change certain things), but I'm trying to see what you're looking for.

Untargetted
First Person: You flex your power, feeling it flow around you as it manifests a small storm. Drawing further upon it, your surroundings shrink to insignificance and the darkening clouds around you flicker with lightning.
Third Person: Wisps of mist condense from the air around Aesyra, quickly thickening into a small cloud. Aesyra grows, towering above her surroundings as the clouds around her darken and flicker with lightning.
Pose: Surrounded by an aura of storms, Aesyra towers here.

Targetted
First Person: Turning towards $target, you flex your power, manifesting a small storm around you. Stepping towards $target, you tower over $target_him as the darkening clouds around you flicker with lightning.
Second Person: Aesyra turns towards you, as wisps of cloud condense from the air around her.Stepping towards you, you are peripherally aware of the clouds darkening and flickering with lightning. Craning your neck upwards, you notice just how tall she seems to be....
Third Person: Aesyra turns towards $target, as wisps of cloud condense from the air. She steps towards $target, as the clouds around her darken and begin to flicker with lightning. Watching them, you notice the disparity in their height, as Aesyra towers impressively over $target.
Pose: Surrounded by an aura of storms, Aesyra towers over $target.

I'm tired, so forgive me for the repetition and any typos.

EDIT: Oh, and I'm not sure if it'd get past the checks due to the semi-godmode stuff, but hopefully they'd let it go because you're a Demi.
Ryleth2008-10-01 11:22:38
I'll make an entry soon enough. But can I ask what the emote is for? Ie. a greeting, an emote for when you are angry? One for just idling casually around?
Unknown2008-10-01 11:29:18
I think you could get away with playing with electricity crackling between the fingers on your hands, flowing from one hand to the other. You'd have to be grinning that evil grin, just to make the effect more complete. There should be sizzling involved, too. Maybe some singing.
Unknown2008-10-01 11:43:41
QUOTE(Ryleth @ Oct 1 2008, 01:22 PM) 565289
I'll make an entry soon enough. But can I ask what the emote is for? Ie. a greeting, an emote for when you are angry? One for just idling casually around?


Good question. My general opinion is "whichever I can use the most in many different situations".

It doesn't help me having an awesome emote / pose if I then can only use it in a single specific situation that only happens once every blue moon.
Moiraine2008-10-01 11:45:47
QUOTE(Zarquan @ Oct 1 2008, 11:29 AM) 565291
I think you could get away with playing with electricity crackling between the fingers on your hands, flowing from one hand to the other. You'd have to be grinning that evil grin, just to make the effect more complete. There should be sizzling involved, too. Maybe some singing.


a la Big Trouble in Little China?
Esano2008-10-01 11:49:56
QUOTE(Zarquan @ Oct 1 2008, 10:29 PM) 565291
I think you could get away with playing with electricity crackling between the fingers on your hands, flowing from one hand to the other. You'd have to be grinning that evil grin, just to make the effect more complete. There should be sizzling involved, too. Maybe some singing.

Aesyra closes her hands, then slowly draws them apart, a sizzling string of lightning linking the two. She starts to play with the lightning, grinning evilly at $target as she passes it from hand to hand. As $target_he becomes more unsettled, she starts sending little spurts of lightning at $target_his feet. $target begins to dodge the lightning as best $target_he can, $target_his efforts looking like some form of dance.

$target is here, dancing to avoid the lightning Aesyra is throwing at $target_his feet.
Unknown2008-10-01 12:03:31
QUOTE(Esano @ Oct 1 2008, 01:49 PM) 565297
Aesyra closes her hands, then slowly draws them apart, a sizzling string of lightning linking the two. She starts to play with the lightning, grinning evilly at $target as she passes it from hand to hand. As $target_he becomes more unsettled, she starts sending little spurts of lightning at $target_his feet. $target begins to dodge the lightning as best $target_he can, $target_his efforts looking like some form of dance.

$target is here, dancing to avoid the lightning Aesyra is throwing at $target_his feet.


laugh.gif

PS: Haven't ignored your other suggestion, Esano, just thinking it over!
Ryleth2008-10-01 12:38:38
Targetted

You regard (person) contemplativly for a moment, a soft chuckle escaping from your lips. Drawing your essence to
swathe around you in a surging electrical dance, a blurred ethereal hawk shimmers into view, keening viciously at
(person) before dispersing into your form.

Aesyra regards you contemplativly for a moment, a soft chuckle escaping from her lips. A maelstrom of energy begins
to eddy around her stature, before coelescing into a blurred ethereal hawk which keens at you viciously, sending a
sharp pain slicing through your temples.


Aesyra regards (person) contemplativly for a moment, a soft chuckle escaping from her lips. A maelstrom of energy
begins to eddy around her stature, before coelescing into a blurred ethereal hawk which keens at (person) viciously
before dispersing into Aesyra's form.

Untargetted

You focus intently on your essence, letting it seep from your frame to form a eddying mist which swathes your form.
Ethereal glimpses of blue feathers and sharp talons swirl in the cloud, as a piercing cry resonates in your ears.

Aesyra bows her eyes momentarily, an ethereal mist flowing from her frame to form an eddying, ethereal cloud. A
soft smile quirks on her lips, as she gazes reflectivly into the mist.


If you like I'll see if I can improve and work on that theme. If you don't say and I'll try something else!
Esano2008-10-01 12:42:47
Remember it's a pose, too.
Unknown2008-10-01 12:51:38
Hrm, perhaps something other than a hawk since I have that as zap already. wink.gif

EDIT: And pose, yar!
Ryleth2008-10-01 13:13:41
Ah cool, thought you wanted it as some hawk bonding thing - say a warning. Have the hawk as the manifestation of your demigod powers. Hrm best get a pose too
Esano2008-10-01 13:40:44
Untargetted
First Person : You close your eyes, focusing on your inner power. Feeling it surge up from within you, you cannot hold back a laugh at the exhilarating feeling as miniature bolts of lightning flicker across your skin. Opening your eyes, you look at the world around you through a veil of sparks.
Third Person : Aesyra closes her eyes, and a look of focus crosses her face. Small bolts of flicker across her skin, and an exhilarating laugh bursts forth from within her. Her eyes open, barely discernable under the veil of sparks that covers them.
Pose : Aesyra stands here, covered in a veil of lightning.

targetted
First Person : Focusing on your inner power, you reach out to $target. $target_he recoils momentarily from the tiny bolts of lightning that now flicker across your skin, but you reach out and grasp $target_his shoulder, sharing the power with $target_him. As the lightning flickers across $target_his eyes, $target_he lets out an exhilarating laugh.
Second Person : A look of focus crosses Aesyra's face before she reaches out towards you. You only have a moment to perceive that her skin is now covered with flickering lightning, before she grasps your shoulder. Energy flows from the contact, and you let out an exhilarating laugh.
Third Person : A look of focus crosses Aesyra's face before she reaches out towards $target. $target_he recoils momentarily from the tiny bolts of lightning that now flicker across Aesyra's skin, but she swiftly reaches out and grasps $target's shoulder. As the lightning begins to flicker across $target, $target_he lets out an exhilarating laugh.
Pose : Aesyra stands here with her hand on $target's shoulder. They are both covered in a veil of lightning.

Think some of my grammar might be a bit off for this one, but I can fix it when I'm more awake.
Unknown2008-10-01 14:11:51
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Still not quite it. :/ I can't really tell you what I'm looking for exactly, just that when I read it I'll be like "omg I want that". <.<