Jewel Wasp?

by Shiawase

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Shiawase2009-01-15 23:36:41
A thrumming aurora blazes down from the skies before settling into the form of a giant jewel wasp. Faceted eyes locked upon you intently, she gingerly clasps a group of 100 sparkleberries within your grasp before bolting off for some other errand.


Anyone know anything about this?
Vionne2009-01-15 23:39:21
It's not just someone's pet doing a delivery?
Shiawase2009-01-15 23:39:47
QUOTE (vionne @ Jan 15 2009, 04:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's not just someone's pet doing a delivery?

A possibility, but who?
Shaddus2009-01-15 23:39:52
QUOTE (Shiawase @ Jan 15 2009, 05:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
A thrumming aurora blazes down from the skies before settling into the form of a giant jewel wasp. Faceted eyes locked upon you intently, she gingerly clasps a group of 100 sparkleberries within your grasp before bolting off for some other errand.


Anyone know anything about this?

Probably a pet.
Tervic2009-01-16 00:18:32
That text seems a little oddly worded....

"....clasps a group of 100 sparkleberries in your grasp...." made me think that it was stealin mah herbs at first, until I read the posts.
I'd rather see "....deposits a group of 100 sparkleberries within your grasp....".
Noola2009-01-16 00:47:26
Yeah, that should be deposits or drops. To clasp something is to grab it and if the wasp grabs it and goes, it's taking it, not delivering it. laugh.gif
Unknown2009-01-16 00:58:42
Oh, sure, no one I asked to review it notices these things before I paid credits for it. tongue.gif
Estarra2009-01-16 01:06:03
It is a bit awkward now that I look at it. Maybe to keep the intent of "clasp":

"...she gingerly presses a group of 100 sparkleberries into your hands..."
Unknown2009-01-16 01:10:52
QUOTE (Estarra @ Jan 15 2009, 07:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It is a bit awkward now that I look at it. Maybe to keep the intent of "clasp":

"...she gingerly presses a group of 100 sparkleberries into your hands..."


That would be nice. hide.gif