The right arm actually looks like fine, mostly. I think the confusion may stem that from that line that flows diagonally down from his neck isn't actually a profile, but like, the edge of one part of his robe thing. But actually, I notice something about his left arm now. At the end of the sleeve, the robe curves a little outwards so you'd think there's be a view of the other edge as well, but it just cuts out; I keeping thinking the other side of that sleeve wraps all around the lute/mandolin thing o_o.

and I liked the smiling Somaria better but can't please everyone!

I didn't mind the smile, I minded that she looked like a scared child. Because that's just not how I envision Somaria.The artwork itself is well done. I love the nwe music bar, Som. I don't mind that there aren't "enough" lines, because fitting 5 lines can make it a little chunky.

I agree with some of the others: the way his sleeve runs into the lute, as if the lute were tucked into the sleeve and "pushing" it down, is a bit odd.

I call that expression "stop messing with my face, ."

EDIT: I think it's her posture, which is not a minor correction to make at this point. She's holding herself very tightly, and she almost seems like she's clenching her jaw, too. That's probably why you've been jumping from scared to plotting to annoyed with just eyebrow tweaks.

The sleeve is much better now

That's a pretty good drawing. It's much much better than I could have ever done.

Either Somaria is a GIANT furrikin, or Daedalion is really short.

My only complaint. Otherwise, it's great.

Someone must've used cosmic magic on them before they were painted/sketched together.

Regarding Somaria's height, I have HUGE problems playing furry characters. When Som was loboshigaru, she looked about the same. No fur, only ears and a tail (Though here I tried to give the illusion that she MAY have just really short fur).

I just.. hate furries. With a passion.

And yet you are a furrikin.

Not by choice. >:(

Still, no body hair. Thanks.

What do you mean?

Obviously was by choice if you spent the 100 credits on a dagger to do it

She was elfen, and was trying to join Magnagora

She should have gone Mugwump instead of Furrikin, though

Or could have gone human, if it was going to be that much of an issue to have fur xD

100 credits doesn't bother me to waste.

I was looking at what's good for the class I want to go into.

I actually would have chosen mugwump, for how badass they have the potential to be, but then remembered how horribly squishy they are. I'd have needed to look into artis and until I actually get into an org, I'd be no better than a cursed maggot defensively.

Elfen is still my first choice.. but I may go back to Lobo.

Color added, lines cleaned. Still have to finish shading and the background (No, it's not staying gray).

Do we like it better with color or without?

Personally, I liked it better without, made it look sort of like an old timey movie and I thought Somaria was a woman from the 1920s. Though, the red doesn't help with that accusation. It's still very pretty in color, though.

Awesome! I love your work!

Som's a sexy ! I wanna jump through the screen an-.. nevermind..