Diamondais2010-10-24 22:27:49
She writes fairly well though, as.. odd as it is.
Unknown2010-10-24 23:15:53
QUOTE (Phoebus @ Oct 24 2010, 02:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You know.. Knowing how screwed up most of us players are, someone is probably gonna design a drink with that
Neos2010-10-24 23:21:07
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Estarra has completed the Bedazzled achievement.
Even Gods like to look nice.
Unknown2010-10-24 23:31:04
QUOTE (diamondais @ Oct 24 2010, 06:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
She writes fairly well though, as.. odd as it is.
I really wouldn't call it good. It breaks a lot of rules of description writing. If you can not write to an audience or within the rules of the medium you're writing for then your talent is fairly stunted.
Unknown2010-10-24 23:49:28
QUOTE (Pectus Dawneye @ Oct 24 2010, 07:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You know.. Knowing how screwed up most of us players are, someone is probably gonna design a drink with that
Golden dragon milkshake, comin' right up.
I kid.
Diamondais2010-10-24 23:49:50
QUOTE (Othero @ Oct 25 2010, 12:31 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I really wouldn't call it good. It breaks a lot of rules of description writing. If you can not write to an audience or within the rules of the medium you're writing for then your talent is fairly stunted.
I never said good, I said fairly well, the flaws being what you mentioned, also unoriginal. The milk bit isn't new, it's been seen before and you can probably find it on another Quotes thread.
Everiine2010-10-24 23:51:13
QUOTE (Othero @ Oct 24 2010, 07:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I really wouldn't call it good. It breaks a lot of rules of description writing. If you can not write to an audience or within the rules of the medium you're writing for then your talent is fairly stunted.
in a world full of people who write like this or evn wrse lik dis it is easy to see why the description as awful and tacky and overblown and flat out ridiculous as it is could easily be seen as something that was written gooder than others because it at least uses capital letters punctuation and attempts to use a vocabulary several steps higher than the rest of the world thank you for reading my post
Xenthos2010-10-24 23:55:55
QUOTE (diamondais @ Oct 24 2010, 07:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I never said good, I said fairly well, the flaws being what you mentioned, also unoriginal. The milk bit isn't new, it's been seen before and you can probably find it on another Quotes thread.
I'm pretty sure this is the same description that you are thinking of.
Unknown2010-10-24 23:56:02
QUOTE (Everiine @ Oct 24 2010, 07:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
in a world full of people who write like this or evn wrse lik dis it is easy to see why the description as awful and tacky and overblown and flat out ridiculous as it is could easily be seen as something that was written gooder than others because it at least uses capital letters punctuation and attempts to use a vocabulary several steps higher than the rest of the world thank you for reading my post
It totes isnt the goodest.
Unknown2010-10-24 23:57:55
QUOTE (Xenthos @ Oct 24 2010, 04:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm pretty sure this is the same description that you are thinking of.
No. The other one was a Taurian who kept..leaking
Furien2010-10-24 23:58:10
I remember her from a year or two ago, in the Spiritsingers.
She has trouble differentiating an 'evocative description' from a 'provocative' one.
She has trouble differentiating an 'evocative description' from a 'provocative' one.
Unknown2010-10-25 00:01:25
QUOTE (Phoebus @ Oct 24 2010, 06:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lolwut?
I had to reread that several times.
It's now imprinted.
Diamondais2010-10-25 00:01:54
QUOTE (Xenthos @ Oct 25 2010, 12:55 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm pretty sure this is the same description that you are thinking of.
It's very possible.
Ameryth2010-10-25 01:06:23
I'm tempted to use it in a drink. But at the same time, I'm too disgusted to consider it. Go figure.
Siam2010-10-25 10:31:17
QUOTE (Aramel @ Oct 25 2010, 06:15 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That character is Aramel's sister.
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Lunatics.
Llesvelt2010-10-25 19:49:22
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Within the burning heart of Brother Sun.
OMG FIRE! IT BUUUURNS AAAAAARGH! THE PAIN! THE PAAAAAAAAAAAIHN!! GET IT OFF ME
GET IT OFF ME! FIRE! I'M MEEEEELTING! FIRE FIRE FIRE!!! The area is ablaze!
OMG FIRE! IT BUUUURNS AAAAAARGH! THE PAIN! THE PAAAAAAAAAAAIHN!! GET IT OFF ME
GET IT OFF ME! FIRE! I'M MEEEEELTING! FIRE FIRE FIRE!!! The area is ablaze!
Chalcedony2010-10-25 20:01:34
QUOTE (thisismydisplayname @ Oct 25 2010, 03:31 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lunatics.
Does that make her related to Talnaras? Because that'd explain a lot.
Nariah2010-10-25 20:25:44
QUOTE (Phoebus @ Oct 24 2010, 11:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It quickly reached and far exceeded my wildest of exceptations for an outrageous, rule-breaking, incomprehensible attempt at a description. My chest heaved a sigh as I was reading, my innocently uncovered, for all to see in plain light, perky breasts, as white as Jadice's Ice Plains; bounced lightly defying gravity.
Llesvelt2010-10-25 20:26:25
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Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "Aiko can breathe lightning, but I've never seen her do it."
You say, "How does one "breathe" lightning?"
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says to a pure white thunderbird, "You're sweet for not wanting to hurt me, but I promise, it won't do much."
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "Well, let's see."
An ear-splitting thunderclap peals through the air as a pure white thunderbird flares her wings, opening her beak and unleashing an orb of crackling white lightning towards you, tendrils of electricity enveloping your body and causing your skin to blacken and body to spasm in pure agony.
You are afflicted with epilepsy.
Your limbs begin to jerk and shake uncontrollably, and you begin to foam at the mouth.
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "What!"
You wince in pain.
Your limbs begin to jerk and shake uncontrollably, and you begin to foam at the mouth.
Your limbs begin to jerk and shake uncontrollably, and you begin to foam at the mouth.
You eat kombu seaweed.
Your nerves suddenly calm down.
You give a pained sigh.
You say, "Do not worry, all better."
Paniced, Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "I'm so sorry, it didn't know she could do that!"
You say, "No, problem.. Not at all."
You cough softly.
You smile softly.
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "What was that, epilepsy?"
You say, "I think so, yes."
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says to a pure white thunderbird, "You should have just hit him with lightning, he's a friend."
Tulemrah whispers soothing words to you.
You say, "I am sure it means no harm."
You pat a pure white thunderbird in a friendly manner.
A pure white thunderbird lets out a blood-curdling scream.
You wince in pain.
Tulemrah gives a horrified gasp.
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers exclaims to a pure white thunderbird, "Aiko!"
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says to you, "She's never done that before!"
You say, "Well, that promises well..."
You say, "How does one "breathe" lightning?"
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says to a pure white thunderbird, "You're sweet for not wanting to hurt me, but I promise, it won't do much."
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "Well, let's see."
An ear-splitting thunderclap peals through the air as a pure white thunderbird flares her wings, opening her beak and unleashing an orb of crackling white lightning towards you, tendrils of electricity enveloping your body and causing your skin to blacken and body to spasm in pure agony.
You are afflicted with epilepsy.
Your limbs begin to jerk and shake uncontrollably, and you begin to foam at the mouth.
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "What!"
You wince in pain.
Your limbs begin to jerk and shake uncontrollably, and you begin to foam at the mouth.
Your limbs begin to jerk and shake uncontrollably, and you begin to foam at the mouth.
You eat kombu seaweed.
Your nerves suddenly calm down.
You give a pained sigh.
You say, "Do not worry, all better."
Paniced, Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "I'm so sorry, it didn't know she could do that!"
You say, "No, problem.. Not at all."
You cough softly.
You smile softly.
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says, "What was that, epilepsy?"
You say, "I think so, yes."
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says to a pure white thunderbird, "You should have just hit him with lightning, he's a friend."
Tulemrah whispers soothing words to you.
You say, "I am sure it means no harm."
You pat a pure white thunderbird in a friendly manner.
A pure white thunderbird lets out a blood-curdling scream.
You wince in pain.
Tulemrah gives a horrified gasp.
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers exclaims to a pure white thunderbird, "Aiko!"
Gentlewoman Tulemrah, Provost of the Aeromancers says to you, "She's never done that before!"
You say, "Well, that promises well..."
The universe just plain hates Llesvelt today.
Neos2010-10-25 20:32:06
QUOTE (Llesvelt @ Oct 25 2010, 04:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The universe just plain hates Llesvelt today.
I want my turtle to afflict on attacking. Though then again I rarely bring him out, because I tend to not use him.