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The Great House of Paavik by Hadrian
Runner Up for January 2009
===ACT 1===
=SCENE ONE=
SCENE Porch:
This well-proportioned porch lies attached to the regal mansion atop a
cliff, overlooking the isolated road which flows into a bustling village.
The summer breeze playfully whistles through its floorboards and a
smattering of vines adorns the roof, a decoration rather than weed. A
round table and four rocking chairs seem ready to serve, offering both a
spectacular view and a sense of privacy. Closing off the mansion's
entrance is a large door adorned with a symbol resembling a closed eye.
PROP Chair:
Professionally fashioned out of sturdy, dark-brown wood, this curvy
rocking chair is in its prime. Some stains and dents show a decent amount
of use, and the chair wears them with pride as if vainly letting all other
chairs know it has an owner who uses it frequently.
ROLE Svetenkin (M) Lord Svetenkin Paavik
COSTUME SvetenkinRibbon:
Tall and lean, dressed in the finest of garments and sporting a
fashionable hairstyle, Lord Svetenkin Paavik is a krokani youth who bears
his highborn status with pride, if a little vainly judging by his
oversaturated appearance. His golden locks hug his face neatly and several
ends curve to point to his green eye, seemingly an afterthought but in
reality the product of many hours spent in front of the mirror. A striped,
sleeveless white waistcoat with golden buttons and formal black pants are
the apparel he has chosen to reflect his mood today. Tied firmly around
his left wrist is a black ribbon with a zigzag pattern woven into it.
ROLE Lukovic (M) Sir Lukovic Paavik
COSTUME Lukovic:
His gaze always strangely downcast, Sir Lukovic Paavik would appear as no
more than a common labourer to the casual glance, for his wide nose, bony
jaw and large maroon eye are hardly exceptional and his outfit - an
unbuttoned, checkered green shirt and knee-high brown cotton shorts -
rarely if ever seen on a highborn krokani. Wavy and ruffled, his brown
hair flits carelessly around his head. A dull silver earring hoops his
left earlobe.
Svetenkin: ENTER SILENT
Lukovic: ENTER SILENT
EFFECT 111:
The curtain rises on the breezy porch of a mansion set high atop a cliff.
Trimmed vines descend from its roof and wrap it in an antiquated yet never
abandoned air. Four rocking chairs around a round table take up the left
part of the porch while the right is currently occupied by two krokani, a
curly-haired blond dressed in chic clothes belonging more at a gala than a
porch, and a brawny brunet with a downcast gaze who seems more a guest
than a resident here.
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: (grinning mischievously) "Why the evil eye, Svet?
You used to like my entrances."
Svetenkin: circles Lukovic, nervously tugging on the black ribbon tied
around his left wrist.
Svetenkin, to Lukovic: "Used to being the key words, Lukovic. Your
childish disregard for etiquette belongs in an age past and these days I
can hear Mother's nerves screeching every time she sees you."
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: "Mom's nerves, or your perception of them, Svet?
You seem to be finding me far more a nuisance than mom."
Svetenkin: grins bitterly, his eye drawn to the roof of the porch for a
moment.
Svetenkin: "It is merely a matter of taste. Those... rags you wear, you
find them in good taste, yes? The rest of society-"
Lukovic: "The rest of society?! When'd you become such a stick-in-the-mud,
bro? I come here for a vacation and hope to be a breath of fresh air for
this family, and all I end up doing's attract those looks. You know the
looks."
Svetenkin: (shaking his head slowly) "You should know better than to
consider yourself a breath of fresh air where the noses are used to
expensive perfumes, Lukovic. I thought we straightened that out a long
time ago. What's with this sudden spark of hope, hm?"
Lukovic: sighs and shrugs, walking past Svetenkin's circle of steps and
leaning back on the fence.
Svetenkin: stops for a moment, before walking to his brother's left side.
Svetenkin: forcefully pulls the ribbon off his wrist and ties his long
hair back in a series of fluidly deft moves.
COSTUME Svetenkin:
Tall and lean, dressed in the finest of garments and sporting a
fashionable hairstyle, Lord Svetenkin Paavik is a krokani youth who bears
his highborn status with pride, if a little vainly judging by his
oversaturated appearance. His thick golden curls are tied back in an
ephemeral cloud, the rest of his hair falling neatly across his handsome
face. A striped, sleeveless white waistcoat with golden buttons and formal
black pants are the elements he has chosen to reflect his mood today.
Lukovic: (slowly breathing the words) "It was a good day..."
Svetenkin: nods emphatically, smiling at some amusing thought or memory
that entered his mind.
Svetenkin: "I was surprised to see you. I had heard you'd been promoted?
My... I thought we wouldn't be seeing you for another year, and a week
later you..."
Svetenkin: starts shaking rhythmically, laughing on the inside.
Svetenkin, to Lukovic: "You should've seen Mother's face, Lukovic! She was
positively beaming when she saw you, but that outfit? And the way you
went-"
Lukovic: (smiling) "Howdy ev'ryones, what y'all been up to?!"
Svetenkin: bursts into laughter, but quickly regains his composure.
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: (motioning his head towards the mansion) "What's
with the party? Is dad better?"
Svetenkin: sighs and shakes his head, pouting his lips thoughtfully.
Svetenkin: "Mother's just trying to cover the rot of her sorrow in a silky
glamour. His cough is horrible - you saw him the Avechary before last, I
think? Much worse now..."
Svetenkin: snorts and waves his hand gallantly, as if to chase off an
imaginary fly.
Svetenkin: "Mother is at his side day and night. The few hours Irminka
spends at home, she complains that Father is too loud and she can't
sleep."
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: "Few hours? She used to spend entire days locked in
her room!"
Svetenkin, to Lukovic: (a sour grimace on his face) "Quite the little
coquette now, I fear. She is the talk of the village, the little Paavik
girl who went astray. Mother is too busy tending to Father to notice."
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: "And you, Svet?"
Svetenkin, to Lukovic: (shaking his head) "I've given up."
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: "Was actually asking how you were doing."
Svetenkin: "Same old... Father's hourglass is down to its last few grains,
I think. Mother still hopes you'll be taking the reins when Father leaves
us. Your thoughts on that are unchanged, yes?"
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: (nodding) "I love my job. Leading the House would
be an unneeded distraction, especially since there is a much better
candidate."
Svetenkin: smiles softly, turning his gaze away from Lukovic.
Svetenkin, to Lukovic: "I was quite taken aback when you first approached
me about it, I remember. But soon enough-"
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: "You found the role fits you perfectly."
Svetenkin: nods slowly, his smile widening.
Svetenkin: "I'm not sure what to do about Irminka, though... She must be
taught, yet there are none to teach her."
Lukovic, to Svetenkin: "In time, surely she will come around."
Lukovic: gives Svetenkin a mighty pat on the back, shooting him an
encouraging smile.
Svetenkin: nods slowly and casts his gaze away from Lukovic, his eye
glazing and his mouth pouting.
EFFECT 112:
The curtain lowers on the scene, leaving the two krokani to their
brotherly chatter. A soft rumbling emanates from behind it as masters of
stagecraft rebuild the scene into a new one to fit the following segment
of the play.
EXEUNT
=SCENE TWO=
SCENE Store:
Many shelves line the walls of this freshly painted store, beset with body
jewelry of extremely diverse designs, from the inconspicuously elegant
sapphire earrings on the west wall, to the grimly tusk-shaped belly ring
on the east. Several painters' aids lie tucked into the corners, most
noticeably a ladder splattered with brown paint and a bucket at its feet.
The counter, apparently failing to avoid the flying tools of eager
painters, is a mess of brown and gold, several distinctly brush-like
shapes adorning its curvaceous form.
PROP Bucket:
Conspicuously inconspicuous, this bucket seems like a painter's aid at a
glance but closer inspection reveals that it is made of a lustrous,
untouched wood, perfectly clean and, what's more, has golden hoops holding
it together.
ROLE Irminka (F) Lady Irminka Paavik
COSTUME Irminka:
Greatly resembling a doll in both perfection and unintended flaws in
design, Lady Irminka Paavik is a krokani woman in the prime of her youth,
beautiful and elegant, yet her face is completely covered in make-up due
to her desire to look older and more experienced. Long, thick lashes
almost cast a shadow on her pale blue eye, her vibrantly red lips always
pout attempting to look ever more serious, and her golden hair is tucked
neatly behind her ears, caressing her shoulders with its tips. Barely
visible on her face is a beauty mark she had attempted to cover. An airy
silk dress hugs her youthful body and pronounces its soft contours, yet
its screaming green colour is anything but pleasant. A pearl necklace
hangs from her long, thin neck, falling deep into a budding cleavage.
ROLE Gavriil (M) Gavriil, Jeweler of Paavik
COSTUME Gavriil:
Youthful and obviously lacking life experience, this chubby krokani's
large brown eye gazes at everything in awe and his comically large ears
perk up at every new sound. The pockets of his shaggy attire are cluttered
with tools of various shapes, some strangely unbecoming of a shopkeeper,
like the toy shovel poking out from his front left pocket. Unwashed, dirty
brown hair sticks to his head much like a rag, some strands escaping
rebelliously.
Gavriil: ENTER SILENT
EFFECT 121:
The curtain now raises on a jewelry store freshly painted in a lush brown,
judging by the stained ladder and bucket tucked away in the corner.
Surrounded by a myriad of diverse jewelry lining the shelves along the
walls, a young, wide-eyed krokani fumbles with something behind the
counter, twitching and turning at every sound, be it rats or a creaky
floorboard.
Gavriil: [mumbling] "Today she... And give... her... Accept? Let's hope...
Hope..."
Gavriil: turns swiftly to the earrings and necklaces on the shelves behind
him and starts rearranging them nervously.
Gavriil: hops over to each of the shelves and gazes at them expectantly,
ultimately returning to his post behind the counter and playing with
something there.
EFFECT 122:
Four quick raps on the door break the silence in the store, tap-tap, tap-
tap, and Gavriil turns completely pale, beads of sweat forming on his
forehead.
Irminka (from the outside) [intoning]: "Oh jewelkeeper, won't you let me
in?!"
Gavriil: flows to the door in three steps and slams it open.
Irminka: ENTER walks right past Gavriil, blue eye focused on a random
piece of jewelry in the store, her golden hair and silken dress rippling
in her wake.
Gavriil: slowly shuts the door and walks to the counter, head lowered
reverently.
Irminka, to Gavriil [whispering]: "Are we alone?"
Gavriil: nods in confirmation, loudly gulping at the same time.
Irminka: passes her hand through her hair gently, gazing upwards.
Irminka, to Gavriil: "Why are you so quiet?"
Gavriil, to Irminka: "M-my... I'm jus' happy to see you, 's all."
Irminka: tilts her head curiously to the left, shooting Gavriil a
quizzical look.
Irminka, to Gavriil: "I come here every day. Did you bump your head while
painting the shop? Marvelous work, by the way, the counter is a work of
art."
Irminka: snorts derisively, but smiles politely at Gavriil.
Gavriil, to Irminka: "N-no. Jus'... Happy to see you... How you doing?"
Irminka: "I am well. Father's cough kept me up all night, though! The man
persists. Healers say he is not long for this world, but I simply cannot
take them seriously. He refuses to die and that's that."
Gavriil, to Irminka: "M-my Irminka, you shouldn't talk like that about
your pa!"
Irminka: looks Gavriil up and down, eyeing him curiously.
Irminka, to Gavriil: "When did you start paying attention to my ramblings?
Dearest jewelkeeper, you know I merely jest!"
Gavriil: "Y-yes..."
Irminka: taps her fingers on her thigh with mild impatience, looking
around the shop, but ultimately approaches Gavriil and leans her back
gently on him.
Gavriil: shudders for a second and wraps his arms around Irminka, leaning
on the counter.
Irminka: "I am so lonely, jewelkeeper! Lukovic and I were never close, but
still, he is so intoxicated with those Paladins of his you'd think he was
in love with them all! Dear Svetenkin is busy these days too with his own
schemes and endeavours... We used to do them together, yet recently...
Must be something secret and important, for him not to tell me!"
Gavriil: strokes the strands of Irminka's hair, gazing somewhere into the
distance, barely listening to her words and in a world of his own.
Irminka: "And Mother, oh, she is aaalways tending to Father. When I ask
her for some juice, she says no, Father needs it more now. When I ask her
to take me to a party, she says no, Father needs her attention now. The
mansion is so boring! So dead..."
Gavriil, to Irminka: "D-dearest..."
Irminka, to Gavriil: "Hm? Oh, sorry, I got so carried away! Sorry! How are
you?"
Gavriil: lowers one of his hands and reaches into a back pocket with it.
Gavriil: pulls a small square container out and holds it in front of
Irminka.
Irminka: lets out a quick, sharp gasp.
Irminka, to Gavriil: "A present! Oh, jewelkeeper, too much, too much!"
Gavriil, to Irminka: "M-my Irminka... Will you be mine?"
Irminka: laughs loudly, winking at Gavriil and snuggling closer to him.
Irminka, to Gavriil: "I already am yours, silly! You call me 'your'
Irminka, and then ask that! You are so funny."
Gavriil, to Irminka: "N-no... I mean... Will you be... my wife?"
Gavriil: nervously snaps open the container to reveal a fiery crimson ruby
ring.
Irminka: stares incredulously at the ring, jaw dropped in a most uncouth
grimace.
Irminka: swiftly breaks free from Gavriil's embrace and steps away from
him, raising her eye from the ring to his face.
Irminka (smiling softly at Gavriil): "Dearest jewelkeeper! Your jokes go
too far. Really, humor can be appreciated only when it is in good taste!"
Gavriil, to Irminka: "J-jokes? Humor... Wha'?"
Irminka (her lip twitching slightly): "Now, if you're done, can we retreat
to your quarters? I yearn for simple bedroom pleasures."
Gavriil, to Irminka: "M-my Irminka... I'm asking you to marry me! Please,
don't toy around..."
Irminka, to Gavriil (screams): "Toy around? It is you who is toying
around, Gavriil!"
Irminka: bangs her head around, as if plagued by bugs and wishing to get
rid of them.
Irminka, to Gavriil: "You really thought I would be yours? I am...
nobility! I like you because you listen to me and you have other notable
talents, but marriage?! Tell me you're joking. Just say it and we'll...
ignore this."
Gavriil, to Irminka: "But I'm not! I love you! My life hasn't been the
same since you came into the store that day..."
Irminka, to Gavriil (laughing): "Neither has mine! You do make me feel
loved-"
Gavriil (interrupting): "Because I love you!"
Irminka to Gavriil: "Love has nothing to do with marriage, Gavriil! Mother
wouldn't approve, Father would just cough out a negative, it couldn't be!"
Gavriil, to Irminka: "We could elope! Be together... elsewhere. We could
do anything!"
Irminka (walking towards the door): "We could..."
Gavriil, to Irminka: "Where are you going? Why are you leaving?"
Irminka (opening the door) [whisper]: "We could do it all... If I felt the
same about you. But I don't."
Irminka: EXIT turns away from Gavriil like a nymph on a breeze and slams
the door behind her.
Gavriil: stares at the door for one moment, blinking the next and
retreating back to his counter.
Gavriil: draws his hand across the counter, wiping away all residue, then
forcefully turns and, in one fell swipe, sends all the jewelry from one of
the shelves crashing into a wall.
EFFECT 123:
The curtain lowers, leaving the enraged shopkeeper to his misery, as the
sounds of delicate jewelry breaking linger in the air for a few more
moments.
Gavriil: EXIT SILENT
=SCENE THREE=
SCENE Porch
PROP Chair
ROLE Irminka (F) Lady Irminka Paavik
COSTUME Irminka
ROLE Svetenkin (M) Lord Svetenkin Paavik
COSTUME Svetenkin
Irminka: ENTER SILENT
Svetenkin: ENTER SILENT
EFFECT 131:
The curtain rises on the familiar porch, still just as breezy and home to
four rocking chairs and a table. The sun has set, however, and the porch
is now lit by starlight. Two of the rocking chairs are taken, sitting in
one a lordly krokani with a silver-lit mane of curly hair and in the other
a young krokani woman, rocking rhythmically back and forth.
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "Proposed to you?"
Irminka (laughingly): "Can you believe it? Absurd!"
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "Quite so. Out of curiosity, how exactly did you
react?"
Irminka: looks at Svetenkin, a weird smile on her face.
Irminka, to Svetenkin: "Are you asking if I accepted?"
Svetenkin (smiling softly): "You must hold me in low regard if you think
me so foolish as to assume that. My question was more along the lines of
how you rejected him, Irminka."
Irminka: moves her hand through her hair, catches a long strand and starts
playing with it.
Irminka (pouting): "I told him off good. I said that I was highborn and he
a peasant, and how dared he ask for such an honour after only a month..."
Svetenkin: raises his eyebrow pointedly.
Irminka (chuckling innocently): "Alright, two months!"
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "And his reaction?"
Irminka (chewing on her hair): "Umm... He looked shocked and then started
crying and begging me to marry him. Annnd... When I was leaving, I thought
I heard a crashing sound... Like... umm, jewelry breaking, I suppose."
Svetenkin: smiles coldly for a fraction of a second, the smile going
unnoticed in the darkness.
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "Irminka! Don't tell me you broke the poor man's
heart?"
Irminka (cheerfully): "Haha! You think I could have? Maybe he really loved
me."
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "Quite possible... However, the subject is wearing
out. Talk! We have catching up to do, I think."
Irminka: nods quickly, letting go of the strand of hair she'd been
molesting.
Irminka, to Svetenkin: "Your fault, really! Always so busy... Mind if I
ask what it is you're up to these days?"
Svetenkin (smiling gently): "Yes. But I am not the interesting one here,
sister, you are! Tell me about yourself."
Irminka, to Svetenkin: "Oooh, always so mysterious, and you claim you're
uninteresting! I am not stupid, you know."
Svetenkin: reaches over the table and pinches Irminka's cheek playfully.
Irminka, to Svetenkin: "Bah! What is there to say... I've mostly been
spending my days with Gavriil, he was so fun. He would take me out to some
village parties, and we'd drink and dance and - oh, it was so fun! But
then the next day I'd be sick..."
Svetenkin: grins mischievously at Irminka.
Irminka, to Svetenkin: "Come to think of it... I've been sick a lot
lately, regardless of the parties."
Svetenkin: suddenly perks up in his chair and his eye widens with apparent
interest.
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "Sick? Perhaps it is Father's illness brushing off
you?"
Irminka, to Svetenkin: "Umm, no... My stomach often feels sick, like I've
eaten some bad food. Which isn't a stretch to imagine, really,
considering..."
Irminka: falls silent suddenly, lowering her gaze.
Svetenkin (eye turning to a slit): "Considering... how much you've been
eating?"
Irminka (gulping): "No! No... My appetite's just been out of control,
whatever I eat, it's not enough. I don't want to, but I have to..."
Svetenkin, to Irminka: "Two months... Irminka, did you give yourself to
the jeweler in only two months?!"
Irminka (gasping): "I... I would do no such thing with just anyone!"
Svetenkin: relaxing in his chair and letting out a loud breath of odd
satisfaction.
Svetenkin [whispering]: "But if he wasn't just anyone to you..."
EFFECT 132:
The curtain lowers once more on this porch, brother and sister falling
into a deadening silence as both realize the significance of recent
events, each from a distinct perspective.
=SCENE FOUR=
SCENE TatRoom:
This large bedroom is both airy and oppressive, well-lit through the
numerous windows but ruled by a giant four-post bed and a bookcase
overflowing with scrolls and books. The floor gleams with cleanliness and
soft particles of dust float through the air, bathing in sunlight. Thick
black draperies frame each window, blotches of grim seriousness in this
otherwise comforting and calm atmosphere.
PROP Bookcase:
As tall as it is wide, this massive bookcase is perhaps too plainly
divided into seven equally spacious shelves. So crammed are the
multitudinous books and scrolls that to find one actually leaning onto
another seems like an impossibility. None of the books are dusty, yet the
lack of space between them can hardly be taken to suggest that they are
often perused.
ROLE Tatlana (F) Baroness Tatlana Paavik
COSTUME Tatlana:
The aged Baroness Tatlana Paavik wears her years with pride and class,
refusing to paint her elegantly beautiful face with the various
preparations kids these days use. She has a stern look to her face due to
her thin lips and piercing green eye. Her love of jewelry is clear, though
always in good taste, her ears adorned with small ruby earrings and a
golden brooch attached to her long black-and-white gala dress.
Irminka: ENTER SILENT
Tatlana: ENTER SILENT
EFFECT 141:
The curtain rises on a well-lit bedroom framed by a large, four-post bed
and a bookcase overflowing with books and scrolls. The many windows
provide ample sunlight which reflects off the polished floor, creating a
comfortable atmosphere. Sitting on one end of the bed, slumped, is Lady
Irminka Paavik, while an elderly krokani woman paces back and forth
irately.
Tatlana: [snarling] "What were you thinking, you stupid, stupid girl?!"
Tatlana: stomps towards Irminka, glaring with apparent displeasure.
Tatlana: [exclaiming] "I didn't have a caring mother to teach me at your
age, yet I still knew better!"
Irminka: makes the slightest of shifts on the bed, eye glazed and staring
at the farthest of things, as if wishing to switch places with them.
Tatlana (throwing her hands up in exasperation): "Well!"
Tatlana: sits on the bed next to Irminka and lets out a loud, theatrical
sigh.
Tatlana: "My girl, my girl, I thought I'd done a good job with you!
Svetenkin is a respected entrepreneur, Lukovic high-ranked among the
Imperial Paladins... You know I value tradition, Irminka, but I hoped you
would amount to more than wiping an infant's slobber."
Tatlana: "Have you nothing to say? I didn't mean to do it? It was an
accident? You used to be so full of meek excuses, Irminka, where has all
your justification gone? Aslaran cut off your tongue?"
Irminka: attempts to say something, but nothing comes out as she resigns
to staring out one of the windows.
Tatlana (sighing): "We will announce that the father is a ne'er-do-well
nobleman whom you fell in love with. Irresponsibly, he abandoned you and
we prefer not to reveal his name. You will raise the child as your own and
none shall speak of it again."
Tatlana: stands up and walks to one of the windows, forcefully closing the
draperies and stealing the light from a part of the room.
Tatlana (mumbling to herself): "Yet another trips on the grand
staircase..."
EFFECT 142:
Closing the curtains on all the windows, Baroness Tatlana Paavik casts the
room into darkness as the theatre's curtain lowers on the scene.
EXEUNT
=SCENE FIVE=
SCENE PorchAlt:
This well-proportioned porch lies attached to the regal mansion atop a
cliff, overlooking the isolated road which flows into a bustling village.
A smattering of vines adorns the roof, grimly slithering in the darkness
of night. The air is still and dead, and starlight fails to illuminate
everything properly. A round table and four rocking chairs seem ready to
serve, offering both a spectacular view and a sense of privacy. Closing
off the mansion's entrance is a large door adorned with a symbol
resembling a closed eye.
PROP Chair:
Professionally fashioned out of sturdy, dark-brown wood, this curvy
rocking chair is in its prime. Some stains and dents show a decent amount
of use, and the chair wears them with pride as if vainly letting all other
chairs know it has an owner who uses it frequently.
COSTUME SvetenkinRibbon
EFFECT 151:
The curtain rises on the infamous porch, touched by Night and swathed in
shadows. The air is still and dry, the playful breeze now gone, replaced
by an almost preternatural silence. Suddenly, the distinct sound of
footsteps marches in from behind the mansion's front door.
Svetenkin: ENTER exits onto the porch and carefully closes the door behind
him, walking over to one of the chairs and making himself comfortable.
Svetenkin: looks left and right theatrically and starts whistling an eerie
waltz.
Svetenkin [intones]: "What a racket you make, Sisters of Fate, it is all
too clear to the careful ear. Your choices are amateurish at best. Why do
you weave this see-through tapestry?"
Svetenkin: "I have never been able to understand one thing - do you find
it a game? Do you weave in hopes one of your strands will rebel against
the entire tapestry and amuse you for a day? Do you weave it to learn
something?"
Svetenkin: hums a fast and upbeat interlude before returning to his
whistling.
Svetenkin: "Most importantly, do you even know why you weave? Have you
ever been asked this? I myself don't know why I take the needle and thread
you've given me, my looks, my charm, wit and mind, and use them so
instinctively. I don't know why I do these things, and I wish to know."
Svetenkin [whispers]: "I was born second and given these tools... it seems
like a joke."
Svetenkin: "In a year, maybe two, you will take Father, I think. Lukovic
seems comfortable with the idea, and Mother will simply need to deal with
it. I will be the next Head, and I will lead the House to a summit so high
it will elude even Raven's eyes."
Svetenkin: coughs rapidly and quietly, taking several deep breaths.
Svetenkin: "I will make you take the blot and that brat of hers. She has
dug her own grave in breaking an innocent heart. Or will you, friendly
Fates, make me make you take them? At times I think myself silly, stupid
even, to think, to hope... But at others, I know I can wield the divine
thread, and I know I can do great things."
Svetenkin: "What they are..."
Svetenkin: stands up and walks over to the door, glancing back over his
shoulder.
Svetenkin: "... remains to be seen."
EFFECT 152:
As Svetenkin enters the mansion, the curtain descends painfully slowly, a
pregnant pause after the disturbing soliloquy. Swirls of colour suddenly
burst in front of the curtain, forming the image of a green river flowing
swiftly through an orange wasteland, glimpses of indigo people and red
stains flashing periodically. The glamours soon calm and form an
inscription in the air that lingers for a few moments before popping out
of existence - "eight years later".
Svetenkin: EXIT SILENT
=ACT TWO=
=SCENE ONE=
SCENE TatRoomEight:
This bedroom looks a lot like someone's pocket - cluttered with items,
claustrophobic and with only the slightest specks of light peeking through
the extremely long draperies covering the windows. A large bookcase looms
over the entire room, empty save for some cluttered books and scrolls on
the third and fourth shelves. Taking up most of the room is a four-post
bed, majestic even in this less than flattering darkness. A long cane with
a raven-shaped handle leans on the nightstand next to the bed.
ROLE Gapkovic (M) Baron Gapkovic Paavik
COSTUME Gapkovic:
The skin on Baron Gapkovic Paavik's face is shriveled and pale brown, ugly
black stains under his eye, his lips bruised and chapped. His balding
scalp makes him look extremely vulnerable as his frail body cowers inside
glamorous blue robes.
ROLE Lukovic (M) Sir Lukovic Paavik
COSTUME LukovicEight:
A sturdy krokani in every respect, experience etched in his ruggedly
handsome face, Sir Lukovic Paavik maintains a constant frown for whatever
reason. Dressed in a plain black sweater and trousers, he is slouched and
his head retracted like a turtle's.
ROLE Svetenkin (M) Lord Svetenkin Paavik
COSTUME SvetenkinEight:
Cold and expressionless, Lord Svetenkin Paavik flaunts his youth, wealth
and status with the most expensive of attires and jewelry. Blond hair
tucked behind his ears, he is dressed in a long blue satin coat and a
matching pair of pants, rings on his fingers and an expensive-looking
necklace hugging his neck.
Gapkovic: ENTER SILENT
EFFECT 211:
The curtain rises on Baroness Tatlana's room, lightless due to the drapes
over the windows and pervaded by a heavy air, the once crammed bookcase
now tragically empty. Under the covers of the four-post bed is an old,
sickly krokani man, bald and shriveled, shaking feverishly. Beside the
bed, a long cane leans onto the nightstand.
Gapkovic: breaks out in a violent cough, wheezing and squealing in agony.
Lukovic: ENTER opens the door and swiftly steps into the room. Casting a
worried glance at his father, he readies to leave back out.
Gapkovic [rasping]: "Son!"
Lukovic: closes the door and slowly walks over to his father.
Gapkovic [rasping] (wheezing): "Do we need to talk?"
Lukovic: ponders for a moment, ultimately nodding and taking a deep
breath.
Lukovic: "Eight years ago, you fell ill much like now. The illness was
extremely taxing on your aged body and, frankly, you were not expected to
live for much longer. If you'd died, I would have been appointed the new
Head..."
Gapkovic [rasping] (nodding slightly): "And Svetenkin approached you..."
Lukovic: raises his eyebrow instinctively, his eye widening in surprise.
Lukovic: "Actually, it was I who approached Svetenkin."
Gapkovic: nods sagely, a slightly worried look on his wrinkled face.
Gapkovic [rasping]: "You... are changing your mind?"
Lukovic: sighs and looks around, seemingly unable to compose his thoughts.
Lukovic: "When I approached him, Svetenkin was quite dazed by the prospect
and only later did he understand how right he was for the position. I
thought this showed character and that I'd been right to approach him. But
when your illness left... and you lived past the two years which were said
to be your remaining lifespan..."
Gapkovic [rasping] (nodding): "I have noticed..."
Lukovic: "A week ago, when the healers told us this was it, I could've
sworn I saw ecstasy on his face for a fraction of a second. I believe his
ambition has gone overboard and damaged his mind..."
Gapkovic [rasping]: "I am overjoyed that you approached me, son. I did not
wish to burden you... I will ready my will as soon as possible."
Lukovic (tilting his head curiously): "You changed it?"
Gapkovic [rasping]: "I knew Svetenkin would desire the position, unlike
you. I merely wished to ease the process. But now, I must make haste, my
moment may come when I least expect it!"
Lukovic (nodding): "I will ask the notary to come. He is with his family
in Celest, though, it might take him some time."
Lukovic: EXIT gives his father's shoulder a comforting squeeze before
leaving the room hastily.
Gapkovic [rasping] (whispering to himself): "My heart is at peace..."
EFFECT 212:
Relaxed, the drained Baron soon falls asleep and strong snoring fills the
room.
EFFECT 213:
Barely noticeable in the darkness, something suddenly moves in the room.
Gallantly, Lord Svetenkin Paavik steps out from behind one of the long
draperies over the windows.
Svetenkin: ENTER SILENT
Svetenkin: glares madly at the door, his face twisted by rage.
Svetenkin [mutters]: "It has come to this, it has! Lukovic betrays me too.
Always seems honest, yet plots against me behind my back. Loathsome,
loathsome..."
Svetenkin: gently pulls a sharp dagger from the left sleeve of his coat
and starts walking towards the bed.
Svetenkin [whisper]: "But this time I will not count on the Fates. My fate
is in my hands, and my hands must set it in motion. The jeweler should
take care of Irminka and the brat, my words fired him up easily. And
Lukovic... should come back soon..."
EFFECT 214:
The curtain lowers as the insane krokani approaches his father's bed with
a murderous intent. As he readies his hand to strike, the curtain covers
the scene completely.
EXEUNT
=SCENE TWO=
SCENE Cellar:
Several storage barrels sit around this cold basement, bottles of various
alcoholic beverages randomly set atop them. Elegantly built into the
western wall is shelving which holds tagged and neatly lined up bottles of
likely valuable contents. A plain wooden door in the eastern wall is
apparently the only entrance.
ROLE Gavriil (M) Gavriil
COSTUME GavriilEight:
Gavriil is gaunt-faced and drawn, and these are obviously not the best
days of his life. A heavy shadow lies under his eye and he is dressed in
rags, head to toe. His hands are stained and skin sags from the bones, one
of the fingers on his right hand noticeably broken.
ROLE Irminka (F) Lady Irminka Paavik
COSTUME IrminkaEight:
The fair Lady Irminka Paavik looks fresh and rested, her skin shining with
health. Free from the confines of jewelry or make-up, she is wearing a
comfortably roomy dress.
ROLE Maryava (F) Maryava Paavik
COSTUME Maryava:
Wide-eyed and short in stature, Maryava Paavik is a krokani girl dressed
in an almost comical combination of the cute and the serious - something
resembling a small-sized black suit on a strawberry-red skirt. Two
oversized bracelets sit on her arms, toy hoop earrings on hear ears, her
cheerfully auburn hair cascading down her head, a few strands stuck in her
long eyelashes.
EFFECT 221:
The curtain rises on a chilly cellar filled with storage barrels and
bottles of alcohol on shelves built into the western wall. A conspicuous
door is built into the eastern wall and surrounded by thick stone blocks,
the sole entrance and exit.
Gavriil: ENTER bursts open the eastern door and drags in Irminka and a
short krokani girl dressed in a silly black suit and red skirt
combination.
Irminka: ENTER SILENT
Maryava: ENTER SILENT
Irminka: shrieks and attempts to escape, pulling the girl by her arm.
Gavriil: slams the door shut and grabs Irminka, pushing her and the girl
into a set of barrels.
Gavriil: reaches into one of his dirty trench coat's pockets and swiftly
pulls out a small, sharp-looking axe.
Irminka: pulls the girl into her arms and holds her tight.
Irminka [screams]: "What are you doing?! She is your daughter!"
Gavriil [mutters] (approaching): "You ruined my life, filthy tramp! You
used me... And this girl is the product of my unrequited love for you.
She's better off dead..."
Irminka (looking desperately for a way out): "But I loved you, Gavriil! I
loved you, I just wasn't ready to admit it!"
Gavriil [snarls]: "LIAR!"
Gavriil: swings the axe around, smashing some bottles and filling the air
with the scent of their spilled contents.
Gavriil (gasping): "Liar... He told me... everything. You... didn't want
people to know it was me."
Irminka: "Who told you this?! They're lies, Gavriil! Mother commanded me
to be silent while she took care of it all. I was too young, too stupid to
rebel, I was confused and didn't know how I felt at all! You must
understand!"
Gavriil: "No. You're just trying to save yourself..."
EFFECT 222:
As Irminka shakes her head in fervent negation, Gavriil comes at her in a
fit of rage. She manages to avoid the axe's swipe, but Gavriil spins
around and hits her with his clenched fist. Flying into the western wall,
she breaks the shelving and dozens of bottles come crashing down on her,
shards flying everywhere.
Maryava [scream]: "Mama!"
Maryava: runs towards Irminka, baffled tears in her eye.
EFFECT 223:
Gavriil pushes Maryava away and throws the axe at her, hitting her on the
forehead with the blunt part. Maryava flies headfirst into the eastern
door and, with a resounding crack, her small skull snaps and a bloodstain
appears on the door.
COSTUME MaryavaDead:
Broken like a ragdoll, the young Maryava Paavik lies in an awkward
position, her neck somewhat twisted and her face and hair covered in
blood.
Irminka [screams] (gurgling): "NO!"
Irminka [yells]: "Mother! Svetenkin! Lukovic! Help me!"
Gavriil: "They are all out... Lord Svetenkin left to Celest..."
Irminka: "How do you know this?"
Gavriil: "He paid me a visit on the way."
Irminka: shoots Gavriil a shocked look, her face covered in blood and
wine.
Irminka: "What do you mean?"
Gavriil: "He came... and told me what happened eight years ago..."
Irminka: gasps quickly, flinching as she feels the cuts and bruises from
the bottle shards.
Irminka: "He told you all those lies?"
Gavriil: "Not lies!"
Irminka [screams]: "LIES!"
Irminka: "Gavriil... Svetenkin is a practical man... He advised Mother to
keep you away from me, to isolate us and spread the false story of the
nobleman who abandoned me... Don't you see?"
Gavriil: tilts his head curiously, a sudden glimpse of innocence in his
eye.
Gavriil: "But... why?"
Irminka: "I can't even begin to imagine... But I think it has something to
do with what you're doing now..."
Irminka (closing her eye): "Like I said, Svetenkin is a practical man..."
Gavriil: flinches, a disgusted look on his face as he gazes at his axe,
then at the bleeding Irminka and finally the dead Maryava.
Gavriil: "Betrayed..."
Gavriil: "... again?"
Irminka: shakes her head and smiles at Gavriil with the last bits of her
strength.
Irminka (tears rolling down her cheeks): "Just this once..."
EFFECT 224:
The curtain lowers on Gavriil's incredulous yells of protest as he runs to
Irminka's side, holding her in his arms as she breathes her last breath.
=SCENE THREE=
SCENE Hallway:
Covered in fine tapestries and a silver-and-green carpet running down its
length, this hallway ends in a staircase leading down. Placed
strategically along the hallway on ravenwood posts are vases containing
artificial plants, an attempt to liven it up. On each of its sides, a door
bars entry into the rooms beyond.
ROLE Gavriil (M) Gavriil
COSTUME Gavriil
ROLE Svetenkin (M) Lord Svetenkin Paavik
COSTUME SvetenkinEightBlood:
Cold and expressionless, Lord Svetenkin Paavik flaunts his youth, wealth
and status with the most expensive of attires and jewelry. Blond hair
slightly messy, a large bloodstain mars his long blue coat. His fingers
are saturated with rings of various sizes and a rich necklace hugs his
neck tightly.
ROLE Tatlana (F) Lady Tatlana Paavik
COSTUME TatlanaEight:
The aged Baroness Tatlana Paavik wears her years with pride and class,
refusing to paint her elegantly beautiful face with the various
preparations kids these days use. She has a stern look to her face due to
her thin lips and piercing green eye. Her love of jewelry is clear, though
always in good taste, her ears adorned with small sapphire earrings, a
vibrant green bracelet on her left arm. A comfortable yellow dress
cascades down her form, ignoring all curves.
EFFECT 231:
The curtain rises on a hallway covered in elegant tapestries, vases placed
along the sides of the carpet running down its length to a staircase
leading downwards. Two doors are here, one on each side of the hallway.
Gavriil: ENTER arrives from the staircase, looking around in slight
confusion.
Svetenkin: ENTER exits into the hallway from one of the rooms, a
conspicuous bloodstain on his coat, closing the door behind him as he
spots Gavriil.
Svetenkin (smiling): "I heard her screams..."
Gavriil: looks at Svetenkin, gaze passing through him as if no one is even
there.
Svetenkin: "What is wrong with you? You did the deed, yes?"
Gavriil: "Why aren't you in Celest?"
Svetenkin: glares at Gavriil with disdain.
Svetenkin: "None of your business. Did you do it?!"
Gavriil: "Why are you covered in blood?"
Svetenkin: backhands Gavriil swiftly across the face.
Svetenkin [snarls]: "DID YOU DO IT?!"
Gavriil: stares at Svetenkin, his face completely blank.
Gavriil: "You lied to me..."
Svetenkin: smirks and shoves Gavriil aside and makes his way towards the
staircase.
Svetenkin: "Crawl back into your little hole. I will do it myself."
Gavriil: "With her final breath, she told me... it was all you."
Svetenkin: turns and raises his eyebrow at Gavriil.
Svetenkin: "So you did do it? And the brat?"
Gavriil: "My daughter... Dead..."
Svetenkin: beams and claps his hands together merrily.
Svetenkin: "Why didn't you say so!"
Gavriil: "You lied to me..."
Svetenkin: "Oh boo-hoo. I just gave you a nudge in the right direction."
Gavriil (breathing heavily): "Right... direc..."
Gavriil [snarls]: "I killed the woman I loved and my child because of
you!"
Svetenkin (smirking): "How easy it is, blaming your own crimes on others."
Svetenkin: "Speaking of which... I think I'll go change and inform Mother
that some terrifying lunatic has slaughtered the family."
Svetenkin: winks conspiratorially at Gavriil.
Svetenkin: "I think it's in your best interest not to be here."
Gavriil: "You are insane."
Svetenkin: "And you, my boy, are so naive you practically asked for it."
Svetenkin: turns and starts walking towards the staircase.
Gavriil: swiftly pulls out the bloody axe and comes at Svetenkin from
behind.
EFFECT 232:
Turning just in time to see the axe flying towards him, Svetenkin raises
his eye to the ceiling as if asking for Divine aid before the axe cuts him
straight across the neck, splattering Gavriil and the tapestries of the
hallway with blood.
Tatlana: ENTER enters from the other side of the hallway.
Svetenkin: drops to his knees and collapses on the floor, bleeding heavily
and paralyzed with pain.
Tatlana: screams and runs towards him.
Svetenkin (with his last breath) [whisper]: "How disappointing..."
COSTUME SvetenkinDead:
His beautiful hair smeared with blood and his face at complete rest, all
of Lord Svetenkin Paavik's robes, jewelry and influence couldn't save him
from the hand of justice.
Gavriil: lets the axe slip from his hand and fall to the carpeted floor.
Tatlana: notices him and wrenches her eye away from Svetenkin.
Tatlana: "Who are you?! Get away! Don't come near me!"
Gavriil: "Please... Baroness... I won't harm you."
Tatlana (stumbling back): "AWAY!"
Gavriil: "He plotted against you all! He made me kill Irminka and-"
Tatlana [screams]: "Irminka? Where is she?! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH MY
DAUGHTER?!"
Gavriil (gasping for air): "Listen to me..."
Tatlana: reaches for one of the vases, showing surprising strength for her
age as she flings it at Gavriil.
Gavriil: avoids the vase and runs for the staircase, looking back to see
Tatlana dropping to her knees beside Svetenkin, despair clawing at her
face.
Gavriil: EXIT stumbles down the staircase, wheezing and gasping as he runs
from the horrifying scene.
Tatlana: softly passes her hand over Svetenkin's cheek, her whole body
shaking.
Tatlana: pulls Svetenkin's bloody torso into an embrace, laying her head
on him and weeping helplessly.
EFFECT 233:
The curtain lowers on the hopeless Baroness as she mourns the loss of her
son, thoughts of what Gavriil said about her daughter whirling in her
head.
EXEUNT
=SCENE FOUR=
SCENE TatRoomLast:
This bedroom looks a lot like someone's pocket - cluttered with items,
claustrophobic and with only the slightest specks of light peeking through
the extremely long draperies covering the windows. A large bookcase looms
over the entire room, empty save for some cluttered books and scrolls on
the fourth shelf. Taking up most of the room is a four-post bed, sheets
ruffled and covered in a smattering of blood. A fire crackles on the
floor, fed by a pile of books apparently taken from the bookcase.
ROLE Tatlana (F) Baroness Tatlana Paavik
COSTUME TatlanaEight
EFFECT 241:
The curtain rises on Baroness Tatlana's lightless room once again, a fire
burning on the floor between the large bed and almost empty bookcase. The
Baroness is lying beside the fire, reading a parchment in the sickeningly
orange lighting.
Tatlana: moves her eye slowly across the text written on the parchment,
blinking as she arrives at the end and shaking her head.
Tatlana: goes back to the beginning and focuses, her face wrinkling, eye
narrowing to block out some of the sharp firelight.
Tatlana: sighs, a tears appearing in her eye as she reads a passage aloud.
Tatlana: "... she was the Sun of my darknesses, the Moon which caressed me
with gentle light when I needed comfort, the Night which shrouded me when
I was too ashamed to show myself, and during those two months our love was
a thousandfold stronger than the most powerful of emotions..."
Tatlana: lowers the parchment and casts her gaze upwards, choking back a
tidal wave of emotions as her body shivers.
Tatlana: breathes loudly into the fire and watches it sway, refusing to
die.
Tatlana: raises the parchment and starts reading again.
Tatlana: "... in my mindless stupidity, I believed him and fell into
despair..."
Tatlana: "... eight years later, he prodded my weakened self inside the
bubble of despair and instilled me with the most corruptive idea of all -
revenge..."
Tatlana: gasps as she reads a section, her eye swiping the text faster
before resting and closing to push out the tears.
Tatlana: opens her eye and glides across the rest of the parchment,
sadness enhancing the aged look of her face.
Tatlana: "... I hope you will forgive me, someday, somehow, and accept
these events for what they were..."
Tatlana: "... never forgive his vile treachery, although I understand what
might have led him to it. With deepest respect and praying for our souls
and the souls of those that you loved, yours sincerely, Gavriil Ikilva."
EFFECT 242:
Gifting the parchment with one last look of sorrow, Tatlana throws it into
the fire which cracks and shifts with newfound power, consuming the text,
its words now known to only two people.
Tatlana: stands up and sits on the bed, taking a small vial from a fold in
the sheets.
Tatlana: "Ikilva's love for a Paavik was true..."
Tatlana: opens the vial and sips some of the greenish-brown liquid,
casting the fire a concerned look.
EFFECT 243:
Tatlana stands up and pours the rest of the liquid onto the fire,
extinguishing it surprisingly quickly. In the darkness pierced only by the
slightest specks of light from the windows, the Baroness collapses and, as
her body hits the floor, a dramatic 'thunk' shakes the scene.